Monday, December 27, 2010

Watching the Clock on New Year's Eve (Poem)

Watching the Clock on New Year's Eve

Let's only call this a night,
     Eve, if the mood strikes.

Give the hours a hand to go
     straight to twelve with a bubbly-pop,

the minutes a push to make it a second past
     with the glass raised for the emptying. From old

to new, from then to now's a matter of counting
     down: ten to nine to eight, your lips puckered

in place. From seven to six, your sleep-allied eyes
     aligning. Between five and four, ready

to take three to two finally unto one, at last, alone,
     the television picture going to snow.

© 2010 Maureen E. Doallas
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I wrote this poem for Carry on Tuesday, which each week provides a prompt that participants are to use wholly or partly in an original poem or prose piece. The prompt for Tuesday, December 28, consists of the opening line of Helen Hunt Jackson's poem "New Year's Morning": Only a night from old to new!

Anyone may respond to the prompt. Go here for instructions for Prompt #85 and to add the link to your contribution.

6 comments:

Hannah Stephenson said...

Gah! Fantastic!! Wonderful countdown to blissful deterioration.

Neva Flores said...

made me smile.........love this!

David said...

It's been a while since I did the traditional New Years thing. Thanks for the memory. I'm following your blog now. Happy New Year!

Jingle said...

aptly put..

gs batty said...

had a few of those in my younger years but the snow appears before my around 9 PM and the new year appears just like any other day.

Joanne said...

Thanks, Maureen. I remember that snow thing on the TV! Ah, sometimes I think we'd be better off without 24/7 broadcasting. The countdown rhythm is wonderful. Feels like everything going into entropy...