tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post1429419411812100951..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: A Mother's Day (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-82336998259651824492013-05-03T09:28:57.857-04:002013-05-03T09:28:57.857-04:00such a captivating story well narrated with a poem...such a captivating story well narrated with a poem, do you have more of this sort for mothers day? well done and keep up with the writing spirit.<a href="http://messages.365greetings.com/poems/mothers-day-poems.html" rel="nofollow">Mothers day poems</a> to her.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55600732329282094242010-05-12T15:06:23.409-04:002010-05-12T15:06:23.409-04:00You bring the reader deep into the story, with suc...You bring the reader deep into the story, with such emotion, so much power, and the situation is "too" real that we as the reader have tears in our eyes believing it happened to us. I sincerely love this poem for the power it sends to others, although the sadness is still. I simply love this work. Nancy Duci DenofioNancy Duci Denofionoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39924194968515060792010-04-29T07:31:39.823-04:002010-04-29T07:31:39.823-04:00your words like a soft blanket today.. blessingsyour words like a soft blanket today.. blessingsELKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10935251214683485912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-3429128147831068682010-04-28T08:47:31.440-04:002010-04-28T08:47:31.440-04:00This part especially:
"she bore as the good ...This part especially:<br /><br />"she bore as the good wife she augured to be."<br /><br />Thank you for giving us this, Maureen.Monica Sharmanhttp://mybigthree.highcallingblogs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-37622154851601655582010-04-28T01:53:34.705-04:002010-04-28T01:53:34.705-04:00"Crumbles of hankies pile up
discarded witnes..."Crumbles of hankies pile up<br />discarded witness to the usual way<br />we work our unanswerable whys" <br /><br />The "keening" group of sisters, mothers. We don't hear this word often. It is a trick when children die before parents. Many complex thoughts woven in. Thx for sharing. I love how you make us feel the emotion with out being merely sentimental.Kathleen Overbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12684519598333961438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-19550555449427311262010-04-28T00:14:30.803-04:002010-04-28T00:14:30.803-04:00This poem is beautiful beyond words.
What an od...This poem is beautiful beyond words. <br /><br />What an odyssey it is, to be a mother. I thought I knew what it was all about, and sheesh, I'm only 8 years in, what do I really know? Enough that it is much more than having my heart walk outside my body for the rest of my life, wondering, worrying for these, my 4 children.<br /><br />Blessings to you and for family. This poem is an heirloom, a treasure.<br /><br />PS: I have a poetry contest going on at my blog this week, you may want to check it out!*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-54977381153735194182010-04-26T20:46:36.375-04:002010-04-26T20:46:36.375-04:00I'm so glad you participated in this community...I'm so glad you participated in this community writing project. You let us inside a Mother's Day that deepened its meaning forever. I'm grateful shared this with us, Maureen, and I look forward to highlighting your family's story on Wednesday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-56592144101685542522010-04-26T17:13:04.574-04:002010-04-26T17:13:04.574-04:00I offer a quiet "thank you" for sharing....I offer a quiet "thank you" for sharing.Jennifer @ JenniferDukesLee.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15934656581948719407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-36977590474722753452010-04-26T16:59:00.721-04:002010-04-26T16:59:00.721-04:00a painful hush ... my own mother passed away 2 day...a painful hush ... my own mother passed away 2 days before Mother's Day 7 years ago ... a difficult time to say g'bye to anyoneS. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68711120949953308302010-04-26T14:08:03.924-04:002010-04-26T14:08:03.924-04:00Blessings to your mother. I am so sorry for her lo...Blessings to your mother. I am so sorry for her loss. And yours also.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.com