tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post1782704534099540152..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Bearing Much Fruit (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-32268324630960830442010-04-07T16:26:43.189-04:002010-04-07T16:26:43.189-04:00Yikes! And the Firstfruit was bruised because of H...Yikes! And the Firstfruit was bruised because of His gentleness. Because we are bruised and imperfect.Sandra Heska Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13770393615748405966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-44883889756785931432010-04-07T13:27:46.946-04:002010-04-07T13:27:46.946-04:00I've come back to this several times ... your ...I've come back to this several times ... your writing always leaves me lacking for words.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-65561429374254991532010-04-06T16:48:35.745-04:002010-04-06T16:48:35.745-04:00Beautiful poem Maureen!Beautiful poem Maureen!Kevinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17933843864810544777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-57223006682932002212010-04-06T14:56:23.186-04:002010-04-06T14:56:23.186-04:00So Maureen, I thumped this poem like a melon ripe ...So Maureen, I thumped this poem like a melon ripe with potential and took in the fragance like a good peach before it's cut, and as is most often the case, the inside exceeded the promise.<br />How do you do this time after time?Dave Fullerhttp://inthezeitgeist.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-9437987450059964412010-04-06T14:05:56.301-04:002010-04-06T14:05:56.301-04:00Take a bow :) and dance your little dance. Lovely,...Take a bow :) and dance your little dance. Lovely, what a blessing this one is - simple, direct yet indirect, delicate, purposeful.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565768346237282648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63452934018974711172010-04-06T13:37:24.285-04:002010-04-06T13:37:24.285-04:00My favorite part of this wonderful poem...
examin...My favorite part of this wonderful poem...<br /><br />examine them with the gentleness<br />of a loving teacher<br /><br />who pointed out with kindness<br />just that once what was could be<br /><br />and always will be<br /><br />Just so cool...thanks for sharing!<br /><br />Peace,<br />JayAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866639097998917122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-81503762852406487632010-04-06T13:33:49.457-04:002010-04-06T13:33:49.457-04:00Everyone is right that there is much here to admir...Everyone is right that there is much here to admire. I was stopped at the bruised apple as in, here is the heart of this poem and I wanted to see you then to to the lines on gentleness. I posted about failing love on my She Writes blog. Have at it and bravo once again! JJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-58457336945365772572010-04-06T13:24:46.745-04:002010-04-06T13:24:46.745-04:00I've read this a few times and I'm still n...I've read this a few times and I'm still not sure what to say. I guess wow and thank you, Maureen... are good for now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-73212639629932725822010-04-06T09:57:03.739-04:002010-04-06T09:57:03.739-04:00Marcus paid you the ultimate compliment on your Da...Marcus paid you the ultimate compliment on your Daddy poem and it <br />could be said of this one; you earn the right for the length of it. I'm still chewing my cud on this. An exercise/intense workout for my feeble brain! :) Brilliant. Did you work hard on this or did it slither out easily?Kathleen Overbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12684519598333961438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-6054331058626349752010-04-06T09:23:57.506-04:002010-04-06T09:23:57.506-04:00You've left me speechless. this is stunning.
...You've left me speechless. this is stunning.<br /><br />And beautiful. And profound.<br /><br />WoW!<br /><br />thank you my friend.<br /><br />LouiseLouise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-83451747563375959532010-04-06T08:38:33.147-04:002010-04-06T08:38:33.147-04:00Ultimately making peace with the imperfect. I lov...Ultimately making peace with the imperfect. I love that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-29381018594119443932010-04-06T00:11:06.479-04:002010-04-06T00:11:06.479-04:00"as if removing the stain
of someone else'..."as if removing the stain<br />of someone else's touch<br /><br />is enough<br />to remove the bruise<br /><br />on the apple's core."<br /><br />Ah, so much in those lines alone.<br />This is one I can't read just once.Monica Sharmanhttp://mybigthree.highcallingblogs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-31242174617894364282010-04-05T22:37:47.744-04:002010-04-05T22:37:47.744-04:00Oh, wow, Maureen, this is incredible. I've rea...Oh, wow, Maureen, this is incredible. I've read it three times and keep finding new things. Wow squared.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.com