tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post2418577501724304999..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Two 5-Line PoemsMaureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53281935494542408922010-09-20T16:34:46.773-04:002010-09-20T16:34:46.773-04:00the way you trail your words is always a delight ....the way you trail your words is always a delight ...S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-44072456431495591302010-09-20T12:21:33.628-04:002010-09-20T12:21:33.628-04:00"Turn with the sun one"
would be my cho..."Turn with the sun one" <br />would be my choice <br />if a flower <br />I was born <br />to be<br /><br />Yours are very complex. Especially the sliver..... <br />I am having fun with this form. Glad to read yours.Kathleen Overbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12684519598333961438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-70362606575986808082010-09-19T19:13:06.032-04:002010-09-19T19:13:06.032-04:00i knew
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somethi...i knew<br />that you<br />would soon share <br />a little<br />something newAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-41947062586115596502010-09-19T14:38:14.298-04:002010-09-19T14:38:14.298-04:00hi m-- very beautiful, both-- perfect for a sweet ...hi m-- very beautiful, both-- perfect for a sweet Sunday afternoon.... xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-67786509563001004392010-09-19T12:17:35.492-04:002010-09-19T12:17:35.492-04:00What wonderful descriptions. I'm going to hav...What wonderful descriptions. I'm going to have to try some of these myself.Miriam Ruffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05170603569411725333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-28977515266179520542010-09-19T12:03:04.575-04:002010-09-19T12:03:04.575-04:00Oh, I love these! I grew up where there were field...Oh, I love these! I grew up where there were fields of sunflowers, and I loved seeing how in unison their gaze followed the path of the sun throughout the day. Your first poem helped me to remember that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com