tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post2709864768650032577..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: facts (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53012502902085302892013-11-07T21:18:31.618-05:002013-11-07T21:18:31.618-05:00Maureen, this poem gathers up that page and presse...Maureen, this poem gathers up that page and presses it deep into a heart. That "thin, sorrowful sky", the "muteness" of the brother, "overtakelessness"...I am just about undone by this one thin page and the way you've pieced together these found words. Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263995875732832349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39799881425970985672013-11-05T16:09:50.347-05:002013-11-05T16:09:50.347-05:00You capture that ache of loss in such a straight f...You capture that ache of loss in such a straight forward way. A perfect found poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-80461388718170269092013-11-05T15:55:44.427-05:002013-11-05T15:55:44.427-05:00truth resists formation ...
aint that the truth, ...truth resists formation ...<br /><br />aint that the truth, but it doesn't seem to stop us from trying to make the truth be what we want it to be ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-60496845791448886852013-11-05T15:54:23.987-05:002013-11-05T15:54:23.987-05:00A great "found" poetry.. cannot avoid to...A great "found" poetry.. cannot avoid to trace some autumn sadness in your imagery. Wonderful and haunting lines.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39514104552262478652013-11-05T10:55:51.709-05:002013-11-05T10:55:51.709-05:00I like the way you blur the syntax by your choices...I like the way you blur the syntax by your choices of line-breaks. I've been re-reading C. K. Williams' collection "Repair," where he also stretches and contorts syntax into impossible grammar that opens up multiple resonances in the poem -- as you do herePeggy Rosenthalhttp://www.poetryretreats.comnoreply@blogger.com