tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post3601578650107389336..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Haiku (after Hiroshima)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-58656129388896824082015-08-20T09:02:29.946-04:002015-08-20T09:02:29.946-04:00Powerful play in that "cloud" of line 1....Powerful play in that "cloud" of line 1. At first I read it as lovely nature! Ha! Then of course realized what this sinister cloud really was.<br />The whole poem is full of rich understatement like this… which is wht makes the poem so effective.<br />Thanks for re-minding us of that horrible day.Peggy Rosenthalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-61908561159734231362015-08-18T12:29:52.446-04:002015-08-18T12:29:52.446-04:00Powerful haiku! Thanks for sharing.Powerful haiku! Thanks for sharing.Kristin Berkey-Abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16841824206762029363noreply@blogger.com