tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post3712825950685459962..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Sower's Promise (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-81069879039864909042010-09-16T20:23:00.773-04:002010-09-16T20:23:00.773-04:00**exhale**
Maureen, I am still lobbying for a boo...**exhale**<br /><br />Maureen, I am still lobbying for a book of your poetry. If I don't get one soon I will have to print out pages of your blog and staple them together like I used to do in grade school. You paint with words.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263995875732832349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-15587856219592436232010-09-16T16:04:19.272-04:002010-09-16T16:04:19.272-04:00..standing columns dressing down…is my favorite li.....standing columns dressing down…is my favorite line in this wonderful autumn poemClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-87385866677046165262010-09-15T17:59:04.621-04:002010-09-15T17:59:04.621-04:00high imagery in this subtle but nice poem, well wr...high imagery in this subtle but nice poem, well written :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-8212275875426829112010-09-15T17:29:50.167-04:002010-09-15T17:29:50.167-04:00love it,
simple, compact, yet poetic and fun!
love...love it,<br />simple, compact, yet poetic and fun!<br />love the changes of seasons and the beauty going along with it.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-59909009130138277362010-09-15T17:00:02.154-04:002010-09-15T17:00:02.154-04:00i love the way you write these short stanzas...ver...i love the way you write these short stanzas...very clever...a beautiful poem and thanks for sharing..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-74120305054918246462010-09-15T16:18:06.775-04:002010-09-15T16:18:06.775-04:00"The seed, already freely fallen,
dies into y..."The seed, already freely fallen,<br />dies into yet-yielding ground"<br /><br />These lines are so evocative of ever-changing impermanence.<br /><br />Lovely one shot.Belindahttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-34141244381106799672010-09-15T14:05:28.963-04:002010-09-15T14:05:28.963-04:00ah.. blessed autumn.. this was beautiful :)
My 1 ...ah.. blessed autumn.. this was beautiful :)<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/09/14/in-your-dreams/" rel="nofollow">My 1 Shot</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-28258626065416636062010-09-15T12:40:23.744-04:002010-09-15T12:40:23.744-04:00I loved these two lines:
"standing columns
d...I loved these two lines:<br /><br />"standing columns<br />dressing down"<br /><br />Fall trees shead summer clothes to face winter, stark and bare.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40879908976619465462010-09-15T10:44:55.007-04:002010-09-15T10:44:55.007-04:00turncoats of oak. Now I love that!
nowhere island...turncoats of oak. Now I love that!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/nowhere-island.html" rel="nofollow">nowhere island</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-70467598310831733392010-09-15T10:16:43.572-04:002010-09-15T10:16:43.572-04:00Nice one shot. Love and Light, SenderNice one shot. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-35289753261383926812010-09-15T08:58:44.697-04:002010-09-15T08:58:44.697-04:00Beautiful...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah ShivayaBeautiful... <br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-74365534216763904912010-09-15T03:38:17.335-04:002010-09-15T03:38:17.335-04:00Lovely poem and your lines captivate very well, ni...Lovely poem and your lines captivate very well, nice i stopped by~Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-59210370283677063202010-09-14T23:40:09.873-04:002010-09-14T23:40:09.873-04:00You made autumn sing. Beautiful.You made autumn sing. Beautiful.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-43680922856183423042010-09-14T22:54:11.647-04:002010-09-14T22:54:11.647-04:00Fall is lovely and mysterious to me. You've ca...Fall is lovely and mysterious to me. You've captured it so well. So many phrases captured me.<br /><br />"standing columns dressing down"<br />My favorite part.Deidrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09145504027833176749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-35013315270657593922010-09-14T22:43:16.748-04:002010-09-14T22:43:16.748-04:00truly lovely!truly lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-62325493640094287142010-09-14T21:22:21.760-04:002010-09-14T21:22:21.760-04:00"come to act the memory of earth..." viv..."come to act the memory of earth..." vivid and picturesque. this is lovely!Kelly Sauerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14138861838948184728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55659669852894930282010-09-14T21:21:59.663-04:002010-09-14T21:21:59.663-04:00I love the great flow of the poem =D beautiful and...I love the great flow of the poem =D beautiful and wonderful imagery of Fall portrayed as well :DRiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-19482937833136402812010-09-14T21:17:40.021-04:002010-09-14T21:17:40.021-04:00I Love Autumn...
You poem ROCKED!!!I Love Autumn...<br />You poem ROCKED!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-72055597070491290402010-09-14T20:47:52.375-04:002010-09-14T20:47:52.375-04:00Excellent description, personification throughout....Excellent description, personification throughout. Images so strong. I particularly liked "standing columns<br />dressing down." Well written. Thank you. Gay (@beachanny).Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-75513872690816600112010-09-14T19:49:49.396-04:002010-09-14T19:49:49.396-04:00oh but i love fall and you capture it well...the f...oh but i love fall and you capture it well...the flash of beauty before the dying so life can live once more...nice one shot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-6177942841416792862010-09-14T19:47:43.048-04:002010-09-14T19:47:43.048-04:00The autumn promise held in the palm breaks apart t...The autumn promise held in the palm breaks apart to remind of the continuation of life. Great depth and captures the feel of fall literally and metaphysically. Happy One Shot, Maureen! Thanks for linking updustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55338416208679542912010-09-14T19:36:54.480-04:002010-09-14T19:36:54.480-04:00I do enjoy the way you write..always capturing won...I do enjoy the way you write..always capturing wonderful images with powerful words! hats off..:) lovely one shot!Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-49871717252465801242010-09-14T19:27:48.168-04:002010-09-14T19:27:48.168-04:00"standing columns dressing down" I loved..."standing columns dressing down" I loved the reversal inherent in thatL.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-9234863905206795772010-09-14T19:05:02.005-04:002010-09-14T19:05:02.005-04:00Maureen,
I love the short stanzas, I could really...Maureen,<br /><br />I love the short stanzas, I could really get a feel and a visual of fall, Short sentences but so powerful<br /><br />Great OneShot xoPatty Sherryhrrp://abcpatty.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-25165292222631710282010-09-14T18:03:22.752-04:002010-09-14T18:03:22.752-04:00The "turncoats of oaks" - that phrase al...The "turncoats of oaks" - that phrase alone is an entire poem. Well done, my good friend.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.com