tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post3843475085067152071..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: The Space I Dream Into Being (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-47016798475547404932011-11-19T22:10:28.340-05:002011-11-19T22:10:28.340-05:00I second Sandra's comment. I was also drawn t...I second Sandra's comment. I was also drawn to the lines: "so many words/escaping the space". Those words played at the edges of my mind, drawing me in, skittering away, leaving me wondering. Thank you!Cindee Snider Rehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14997207017359343963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-13737939512623115212011-11-18T20:13:32.930-05:002011-11-18T20:13:32.930-05:00Ah, Maureen. I love this. Love the play on cold/ko...Ah, Maureen. I love this. Love the play on cold/kohled. I want to be like you when I grow up.Sandra Heska Kinghttp://sandraheskaking.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-62213125311568451402011-11-17T21:42:40.122-05:002011-11-17T21:42:40.122-05:00"blown thick with hot breath"...marvelou..."blown thick with hot breath"...marvelous!michelle ortegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12948306871519445871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-28307847597475954322011-11-16T19:57:09.444-05:002011-11-16T19:57:09.444-05:00Love the beginning:
"I look up, wanting
to ...Love the beginning: <br /><br />"I look up, wanting<br />to finger the face<br /><br />of rain,..." <br /><br />and <br /><br />"so many words<br />escaping the space..."<br /><br />Wonderful wistful feeling here.violethttp://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-86091800890795868532011-11-16T18:00:01.468-05:002011-11-16T18:00:01.468-05:00You've made it sound appealing ...You've made it sound appealing ...S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-31690231172107562322011-11-16T14:29:56.325-05:002011-11-16T14:29:56.325-05:00i never thought about the face of rain before...i never thought about the face of rain before...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-52414436820653318882011-11-16T14:20:43.840-05:002011-11-16T14:20:43.840-05:00Monica, I made the word "kohl" a verb; i...Monica, I made the word "kohl" a verb; in addition to the color, I wanted a play on a sound for "cold". When I think of cold, slant rain, I see it as these tiny black lines cutting up the sky.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-60742150852633242332011-11-16T12:18:51.756-05:002011-11-16T12:18:51.756-05:00Maureen, I really like when you write in pairs of ...Maureen, I really like when you write in pairs of lines. That really appeals to me, though I can't articulate why.<br /><br />Now, I need to look up "kohled"...<br />(Thanks again!)Monica Sharmanhttp://monicasharman.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-69089616021874802712011-11-16T07:53:11.138-05:002011-11-16T07:53:11.138-05:00The face of rain, a scrumptious conceit. I love yo...The face of rain, a scrumptious conceit. I love your way of looking up.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.com