tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post409289790112847598..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Persistence (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-23099927985725518022011-04-26T11:48:23.613-04:002011-04-26T11:48:23.613-04:00Solid work.Solid work.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-16385932571069126212011-04-25T00:51:20.486-04:002011-04-25T00:51:20.486-04:00Oh, the Shadorma...one I've yet to try, but no...Oh, the Shadorma...one I've yet to try, but now, newly inspired by you.<br /><br />I like your use of words here, rappelling, ascending, flat-lined horizons, all fittingly good.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-71707170896279852462011-04-24T23:12:27.296-04:002011-04-24T23:12:27.296-04:00and still ... sadnessand still ... sadnessS. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-15338792563899395382011-04-24T23:11:53.362-04:002011-04-24T23:11:53.362-04:00there is some fabulous word play you use in this.....there is some fabulous word play you use in this...very nice maureenBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-5193776717224282462011-04-24T22:59:31.817-04:002011-04-24T22:59:31.817-04:00What a great line..."no flat-line horizons&qu...What a great line..."no flat-line horizons"....a sad but but so true a statement...hard to really think about ....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-61930578216574109062011-04-24T19:28:58.999-04:002011-04-24T19:28:58.999-04:00"Flat-lined horizons" - a phenomenally g..."Flat-lined horizons" - a phenomenally good line for that photo. Well done, Maureen.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-47007254687757770192011-04-24T17:53:58.900-04:002011-04-24T17:53:58.900-04:00The Shadorma is an addictive form, and you are exc...The Shadorma is an addictive form, and you are excellent at it. The pun through "grey's no matter" and "no flat-lined horizons" work wonderfully both as negations and suitable imagery for your theme. Great Shadorma!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-33654533560724020582011-04-24T17:42:47.997-04:002011-04-24T17:42:47.997-04:00I love it. Like me...it's all straight ahead,...I love it. Like me...it's all straight ahead, and death as Dumbledore said, is just the next great adventure! Well written. (I think several of us are enjoying this Shadorma form..it works just right for some topics.)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.com