tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post4318175030594266683..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Lift and Break the Morning Out (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-85852815574620362072011-11-19T14:24:52.398-05:002011-11-19T14:24:52.398-05:00beautiful.
:)beautiful.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-12372206702181835522011-11-15T03:39:48.402-05:002011-11-15T03:39:48.402-05:00Your words complement the image very well, even in...Your words complement the image very well, even in their layout as well as their meaning. Lovely Magpie!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84404017781179988522011-11-14T20:15:38.039-05:002011-11-14T20:15:38.039-05:00Sad. But lovely.Sad. But lovely.Brandee Shaferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08960175760263515363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-11780867913338623172011-11-14T19:11:36.278-05:002011-11-14T19:11:36.278-05:00Caught up in the emotion of this.Caught up in the emotion of this.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-30950568407858951702011-11-14T17:34:30.410-05:002011-11-14T17:34:30.410-05:00Maureen this is magnificent....just love your writ...Maureen this is magnificent....just love your writing!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-62514913085901819432011-11-14T16:01:19.544-05:002011-11-14T16:01:19.544-05:00who perches on the rungs is my favorite part maure...who perches on the rungs is my favorite part maureen...the recounting of the beeds of forgiveness too...what a futile effort...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-46497352560249906272011-11-14T13:50:49.520-05:002011-11-14T13:50:49.520-05:00A beautiful and moving poem, Maureen. Lyrical yet ...A beautiful and moving poem, Maureen. Lyrical yet very clean, nothing extraneous, each image earned, one after the other. May your spirits lift with those clouds...xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-70408112794908623862011-11-14T13:45:30.135-05:002011-11-14T13:45:30.135-05:00your words echo the ending and the loss, the never...your words echo the ending and the loss, the never again and the too late...masterfully painted by breaking the lines in a way that i hear the wind rushing through them...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-56215696765815244022011-11-14T13:30:00.835-05:002011-11-14T13:30:00.835-05:00This was my first time using a Magpie prompt. I en...This was my first time using a Magpie prompt. I enjoyed the opportunity. Thank you all for the very kind comments.<br /><br />I learned from someone responding in comments section on the Magpie site that the image provided for the prompt is by Rosie Hardy.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-88550905578576310602011-11-14T12:32:56.812-05:002011-11-14T12:32:56.812-05:00I read this yesterday(in fact it was the impetus w...I read this yesterday(in fact it was the impetus which got me to tackle the prompt) and was amazed to temporary silence by your imagery here. The line breaks are extremely effective in conveying a sense of disjointed alienation, and the words themselves paint a sense of deep loss. Esp like '..no invitation to count/ the beads prayed/ once for forgiveness..' and the contrast 'once' makes with 're-searching.' And of course, the final classic lines which give the poem its title.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-87399536859932616662011-11-14T04:00:20.938-05:002011-11-14T04:00:20.938-05:00Mysterious...Mysterious...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-45502742060331988662011-11-14T01:22:30.609-05:002011-11-14T01:22:30.609-05:00i could feel myself searching through the mist!!.....i could feel myself searching through the mist!!..lovely.xKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-49808223746775538032011-11-13T22:05:43.318-05:002011-11-13T22:05:43.318-05:00I hope somebody perches there...
=)I hope somebody perches there...<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-61247706363346417972011-11-13T18:53:12.547-05:002011-11-13T18:53:12.547-05:00The word "forgiveness" seems to resonate...The word "forgiveness" seems to resonate throughout this poem---very dreamy and wistful, just like the image.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63073984490482518022011-11-13T18:15:17.016-05:002011-11-13T18:15:17.016-05:00I so love the scuffed rungs and the hope of columb...I so love the scuffed rungs and the hope of columbine!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.com