tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post4624806203021621383..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Prop (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63993972978851815872013-10-18T09:57:11.067-04:002013-10-18T09:57:11.067-04:00I feel it disappear in my own hands. Sweet work, M...I feel it disappear in my own hands. Sweet work, Maureen.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-86289086051827500352013-10-16T00:43:19.729-04:002013-10-16T00:43:19.729-04:00this is amazing. you have created magic with those...this is amazing. you have created magic with those last lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-41046439567754848112013-10-15T22:37:54.789-04:002013-10-15T22:37:54.789-04:00I love those who have the ability to say so much i...I love those who have the ability to say so much in fewer words. Strong powerful piece.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-29211561620023778152013-10-15T20:01:27.728-04:002013-10-15T20:01:27.728-04:00amazing & powerful, so powerfulamazing & powerful, so powerfulruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16012181529786952855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-44031721381300813812013-10-15T19:21:52.265-04:002013-10-15T19:21:52.265-04:00So much said in so little. Incredibly written poem...So much said in so little. Incredibly written poem on love and loss.Linda Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10387405429395292887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-24096816408202608012013-10-15T17:43:54.649-04:002013-10-15T17:43:54.649-04:00Agree - this exemplifies "The Redress of Poet...Agree - this exemplifies "The Redress of Poetry" that Seamus Heaney addressed in that book. The turn, the counterweight, the paradox. Exquisite work.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-45559631729280616312013-10-15T10:55:48.100-04:002013-10-15T10:55:48.100-04:00Again, I'm wowed by what you accomplish with l...Again, I'm wowed by what you accomplish with line breaks. Here, in each stanza, the second line flips over what had seemed the meaning of the first. This gives the poem's sense of loss extra poignancy--because hope had burnt high in each of the 1st lines.Peggy Rosenthalnoreply@blogger.com