tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post4996210023203061834..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Autumn Equinox (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-12600666350189794372011-10-06T09:40:04.084-04:002011-10-06T09:40:04.084-04:00profound flow.
wow.profound flow.<br />wow.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68977226413360029292011-10-05T19:41:33.629-04:002011-10-05T19:41:33.629-04:00This was really excellent Maureen --
"...r...This was really excellent Maureen -- <br /><br />"...rush headlong<br />together<br />signaler<br />and harvester..."<br /><br />I found this passage to be strong.robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-47912555697023905982011-10-05T18:26:13.097-04:002011-10-05T18:26:13.097-04:00Amen, I know from whence I came, and I know where ...Amen, I know from whence I came, and I know where I am going, my ashes really do no matter, for God has a new body for especially for me being prepared.a joyful noisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08712092116466408490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-38947913389496716792011-10-05T14:30:31.025-04:002011-10-05T14:30:31.025-04:00What a wonderful promise and the cycle of life so ...What a wonderful promise and the cycle of life so well done and can see how you were inspired to write this<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/04/memories/#comment-1442Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-21707053565288653192011-10-04T21:49:18.116-04:002011-10-04T21:49:18.116-04:00The construction and separations make this piece a...The construction and separations make this piece all the more powerful. It's spareness lends to the essential message within, the inescapable cycles of life. Enjoyable read.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63807428403072100102011-10-04T21:14:47.649-04:002011-10-04T21:14:47.649-04:00Fall and spring have the most beautiful poems writ...Fall and spring have the most beautiful poems written for them--something about them must speak to us very deeply of our own connection and renewal in their force--as expressed so simply and with such smoothness here.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-11491755113761180142011-10-04T19:01:52.583-04:002011-10-04T19:01:52.583-04:00Quite the cycle. Like a phoenix from the ashes...a...Quite the cycle. Like a phoenix from the ashes...a beautiful depiction of the season, and life.Chris G.http://cianphelan.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-65864006040276226632011-10-04T18:43:25.191-04:002011-10-04T18:43:25.191-04:00This is beautiful... We are like the earth, ashes ...This is beautiful... We are like the earth, ashes to ashes, dust to dust. <br />Wonderful.floydhttp://theregoi.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-90597307648291004862011-10-04T18:16:51.445-04:002011-10-04T18:16:51.445-04:00nice picture of hopenice picture of hopeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-78791149977424056702011-10-04T17:45:14.653-04:002011-10-04T17:45:14.653-04:00Didn't get to hear the recording, but I loved ...Didn't get to hear the recording, but I loved the balance and the nostalgia inherent in the season, fitted into your lines. Beautiful. G.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-2288777474184925162011-10-04T17:35:07.189-04:002011-10-04T17:35:07.189-04:00SoundCloud appears to be having some technical dif...SoundCloud appears to be having some technical difficulties, so if the audio is not working on your visit, please check back here later to listen to my recording. Thank you.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-34868277383325948182011-10-04T17:26:56.576-04:002011-10-04T17:26:56.576-04:00lovely poem about the cycle of life.lovely poem about the cycle of life.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-82061698667730230582011-10-04T15:55:26.284-04:002011-10-04T15:55:26.284-04:00Natural balance to things and your verse, very nic...Natural balance to things and your verse, very nice.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-62104480803083895622011-10-04T15:30:48.567-04:002011-10-04T15:30:48.567-04:00This form creates such a powerful tension, sense o...This form creates such a powerful tension, sense of the speaker striving for exactitude-- an exquisite and contemplative. I especially love:<br /><br />Day and night<br />divide<br /><br />as equals<br />rush headlong<br /><br />together<br /><br />signaler<br />and harvester<br /><br />xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-49626107854565269972011-10-04T15:29:52.136-04:002011-10-04T15:29:52.136-04:00the cycle of life...rising and falling...reused in...the cycle of life...rising and falling...reused in another...for the good of all...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-35661549050818179422011-10-04T12:10:29.821-04:002011-10-04T12:10:29.821-04:00you words
standing tall in my garden
a stem uphold...you words<br />standing tall in my garden<br />a stem upholding <br />lovely withered petals <br />surrounding seeds<br />to feed the little birdsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39940854080656954452011-10-04T10:52:53.145-04:002011-10-04T10:52:53.145-04:00Just perfect, Maureen. And very comforting.Just perfect, Maureen. And very comforting.katdishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09210738418270395622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-545456035821613042011-10-04T10:19:22.221-04:002011-10-04T10:19:22.221-04:00Nature has its seasons and we have our seasons in ...Nature has its seasons and we have our seasons in life too. <br />Beautiful poem, Maureen!Cris Ferreirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12029598012626442396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-51989846997893589502011-10-04T08:45:35.818-04:002011-10-04T08:45:35.818-04:00What beautiful inspiration arose from Christine...What beautiful inspiration arose from Christine's essay.<br /><br />Lovely.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-16589957684621256092011-10-04T08:15:27.764-04:002011-10-04T08:15:27.764-04:00A beautiful cycle of promise and life.A beautiful cycle of promise and life.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-37288578953364182312011-10-04T07:39:34.050-04:002011-10-04T07:39:34.050-04:00Beautiful, just like autumn.Beautiful, just like autumn.Steve Gravanohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13840984762759524660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55102650434744713252011-10-04T06:49:04.827-04:002011-10-04T06:49:04.827-04:00Lovely poem, Maureen -- the sense of the inevitabi...Lovely poem, Maureen -- the sense of the inevitability of the natural order.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.com