tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post5521692328834386491..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Our Hunger and Our Thirst (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53342431674350190342012-12-07T20:21:45.694-05:002012-12-07T20:21:45.694-05:00This is gorgeous... for so many reasons. I look f...This is gorgeous... for so many reasons. I look forward to reading more of you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-59910884236245048552012-12-05T10:50:37.672-05:002012-12-05T10:50:37.672-05:00See me as more than
this single thing wanting.
Se...See me as more than<br />this single thing wanting.<br /><br />See me<br />in you as in a mirror<br />repeating<br /><br />..my fave lines.. that ring so perfectly into my ears.. thank you for this.<br /><br />good day!<br />kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-6863981746342760702012-12-05T08:52:09.276-05:002012-12-05T08:52:09.276-05:00WonderfulWonderfulElisabeth Zguta, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10081907532476759685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63765278698981847022012-12-05T01:32:14.320-05:002012-12-05T01:32:14.320-05:00Ah, Maureen. This was simply beautiful. What more ...Ah, Maureen. This was simply beautiful. What more can I say except I absolutely loved this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12950025662124064408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40501604158067233722012-12-04T22:20:54.383-05:002012-12-04T22:20:54.383-05:00Oh my. this is stunning.
Wow
I love these lines....Oh my. this is stunning.<br /><br />Wow<br /><br />I love these lines...<br /><br />the oldest story you can recall,<br />how when we stood side by side<br />to embrace the dying fire our hands filled<br /><br />with what our hearts could not<br />fathomLouise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-7387048226713703112012-12-04T20:02:47.334-05:002012-12-04T20:02:47.334-05:00I've read this five times. I left and I came b...I've read this five times. I left and I came back. Each line, each grouping holds layers of meanings, of memories, of cliches reworded that reach back to school yards, to pre-pubescent yearning. Here is the truth of discovery, and the loss in aging, the changing, the need, and the letting go as more than gravity pushes down on mind and spirit. This is stunningly intelligent and brilliant.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-65864328391444807472012-12-04T17:43:12.108-05:002012-12-04T17:43:12.108-05:00oh Maureen... this is so beautiful, full of exquis...oh Maureen... this is so beautiful, full of exquisite lines that blur the lines of separation we humans fearfully create.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84590116481144406742012-12-04T15:56:39.341-05:002012-12-04T15:56:39.341-05:00Scratch yourself
from your enemy's face.
Look...Scratch yourself<br />from your enemy's face.<br /><br />Look for the difference.<br /><br />Tell me why it matters...great opening maureen....and love toward the end when our hands fill with what our hearts can not fathom....ha...very nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-89295164126008927532012-12-04T15:51:23.367-05:002012-12-04T15:51:23.367-05:002327gericel2327gericelemmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-19648047640784447552012-12-04T15:50:24.224-05:002012-12-04T15:50:24.224-05:00This is just too good, Maureen. More people need t...This is just too good, Maureen. More people need to read your work. This poem is ripe with talented writing. So glad to have made your acquaintance.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-10357240910218497722012-12-04T15:32:01.834-05:002012-12-04T15:32:01.834-05:00Beaten to dust it would seem, breaking at the actu...Beaten to dust it would seem, breaking at the actual seam. Great write!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com