tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post5696699845415565831..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Spoonful (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-76738070985127119912013-08-21T13:29:23.400-04:002013-08-21T13:29:23.400-04:00I read something different, darker:
- the openin...I read something different, darker: <br /><br />- the opening line - "it started without eating"<br /><br />then the mention of scales in the 2nd line, then the 2nd to last stanza - "I care when you take me in"<br /><br />a sense of being taken in, of being deceived?<br /><br />~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55224128802672865952013-08-21T10:04:44.808-04:002013-08-21T10:04:44.808-04:00Indeed there is an awful lot more going on between...Indeed there is an awful lot more going on between the lines ~ a playful and fun poemMike Sutcliffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17306691004504818181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-78142961162932493832013-08-20T19:46:02.464-04:002013-08-20T19:46:02.464-04:00Very clever, sexy, romantic. A lot "between t...Very clever, sexy, romantic. A lot "between the lines" here. Always enjoy your work.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-4015729031200884492013-08-20T19:32:25.850-04:002013-08-20T19:32:25.850-04:00Like this Maureen. Very cool write.Like this Maureen. Very cool write.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39541913185240446982013-08-20T15:23:40.677-04:002013-08-20T15:23:40.677-04:00This really got me thinking... love that blueberry...This really got me thinking... love that blueberry... I can see that... a tender yet something more.... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com