tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post6348348416619453293..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Morning Tea (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-28739649437392550592014-02-25T01:22:27.198-05:002014-02-25T01:22:27.198-05:00You are a good finder!You are a good finder!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-4636644045531940072014-02-20T09:37:59.456-05:002014-02-20T09:37:59.456-05:00You and I want beginnings in a new house... instan...You and I want beginnings in a new house... instantly recognisable sentiment, yet something very intriguing about this couple, and those fine cracks... Drinking tea has never been purely comfort to me, there is something a shade hidden there.Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63279418863896652252014-02-19T14:13:07.632-05:002014-02-19T14:13:07.632-05:00Beautiful calmness and serenity there - a wonderfu...Beautiful calmness and serenity there - a wonderful effect!Abhrahttp://www.abhrapal.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40545879713886347962014-02-18T21:50:34.185-05:002014-02-18T21:50:34.185-05:00Had a full circle type feel from start to finish, ...Had a full circle type feel from start to finish, great last line tooPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-10664591916966369232014-02-18T21:15:09.574-05:002014-02-18T21:15:09.574-05:00What Elinor Wylie did for "softness" and...What Elinor Wylie did for "softness" and "white" in WHITE SHOES, you do here for delicate and fragile. There is elegance of line throughout and the anxiety of breakage carried through from the opening line. Excellent work here, as always.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-91886133412558244612014-02-18T19:29:50.348-05:002014-02-18T19:29:50.348-05:00Your last line is perfect.Your last line is perfect.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-33721805049583893802014-02-18T17:58:11.564-05:002014-02-18T17:58:11.564-05:00i like this for what it is
just as it is
all the w...i like this for what it is<br />just as it is<br />all the words<br />and everything the words<br />hold for me<br />i <br />like <br />itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-77988984197792958012014-02-18T17:06:48.814-05:002014-02-18T17:06:48.814-05:00Exquisite piece, Maureen... I especially like:
Th...Exquisite piece, Maureen... I especially like:<br /><br />The rusty-silver spoon holds<br />gooseberries, and we are<br /><br />so sorry for the old German<br />teacup, its lip poutingLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-82851106139378298192014-02-18T17:00:31.430-05:002014-02-18T17:00:31.430-05:00Maureen, can't believe this but I also posted ...Maureen, can't believe this but I also posted my poem --Morning Tea Cup Prayer for @dVersePoets! <br />I guess we are riding the same wave on the universe today!<br />Enjoyed the found poem & the analogy of a strong German cup of tea! -joanieJoan Barrett Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08078385285085867796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-62122003186182589512014-02-18T16:13:23.455-05:002014-02-18T16:13:23.455-05:00honestly i cant put my finger on this one maureen....honestly i cant put my finger on this one maureen....some nice touches...the rusted silver spoon and the porceline voice...i am just unsure how to feel in the end....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40043941635771199782014-02-18T16:12:24.577-05:002014-02-18T16:12:24.577-05:00honestly having a hard time putting my finger on t...honestly having a hard time putting my finger on this one maureen...the rusted silver spoon....the porcelin voice....i am unsure how to feel in the end of it though....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-76490740627241989012014-02-18T15:59:03.502-05:002014-02-18T15:59:03.502-05:00Interesting comment about "deceit and distrus...Interesting comment about "deceit and distrust", Bjorn. Would welcome further explication.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-76214690765906111942014-02-18T15:51:57.041-05:002014-02-18T15:51:57.041-05:00The porcelain voice... Ties so well to that crack ...The porcelain voice... Ties so well to that crack in the beginning... I find deceit and distrust within your love story... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39408037094922330062014-02-18T11:54:52.611-05:002014-02-18T11:54:52.611-05:00I love what you do with the opening two words. Tha...I love what you do with the opening two words. That "crack" is instantly maybe the teacup itself and also the relationship that follows in the poem's story. That "crack," right at the start where you put it, becomes onomatopoetic. So much you're able to do with just two words!Peggy Rosenthalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-44577202158090643072014-02-18T09:57:01.347-05:002014-02-18T09:57:01.347-05:00What a lovely, intimate, mysterious little story h...What a lovely, intimate, mysterious little story here!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-63709563989612002302014-02-18T09:10:39.758-05:002014-02-18T09:10:39.758-05:00oh, look at you! I love this. Found in the archive...oh, look at you! I love this. Found in the archives of a beginning that was only that. A beginning. Fitting that it began a poem. :)L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12592498863483967730noreply@blogger.com