tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post7470676429210639283..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: The Fury of Love and Devotion (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-10236129193939373262009-09-30T09:48:33.440-04:002009-09-30T09:48:33.440-04:00Wow, I guess they like it!
I'm honored by all...Wow, I guess they like it!<br /><br />I'm honored by all of your comments, Glynn, L.L., and Billy. (And to think, the only person I ever showed this to until now was a former professor who didn't have much if anything to say about it. I'm glad I didn't throw it out.<br /><br />~ MoMaureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-54402083975017329322009-09-29T23:17:08.223-04:002009-09-29T23:17:08.223-04:00Velvet words their own lies trace.
In your mouth
t...Velvet words their own lies trace.<br />In your mouth<br />they bleed with devotion.<br /><br />Amazing. This poem blessed me.Billy Coffeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08988347213957444145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-87683270318761478642009-09-29T16:22:12.519-04:002009-09-29T16:22:12.519-04:00Here's a favorite line...
"rubbed scarle...Here's a favorite line...<br /><br />"rubbed scarlet with his love."<br /><br />:)L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-83261496192701375312009-09-29T16:06:14.084-04:002009-09-29T16:06:14.084-04:00"They poise honor on a slip of bitter metal&q..."They poise honor on a slip of bitter metal" -- that's packed with so much meaning I don't know where to start. Very nice, indeed.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.com