tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post7573663563101713646..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Spirits With Time (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-57126561582484377882010-11-24T12:54:26.127-05:002010-11-24T12:54:26.127-05:00Your words are beautiful, and the poetry that you ...Your words are beautiful, and the poetry that you share as well. Thanks for your comment on my blog about my book with Seth.rivergardenstudiohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018601892508498148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-14391857599388061192010-11-22T11:51:14.066-05:002010-11-22T11:51:14.066-05:00Hi M-- this is indeed very lovely and strong. I t...Hi M-- this is indeed very lovely and strong. I think it's one for the books...xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-2501043955803518462010-11-22T09:12:27.549-05:002010-11-22T09:12:27.549-05:00Breath blew a mountain
What a beautiful poem.
bu...Breath blew a mountain<br /><br />What a beautiful poem.<br /><br />but then, your poems are always beautiful and provocative and soothing and heartfelt, all in one.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-83561870541489769352010-11-21T23:36:18.868-05:002010-11-21T23:36:18.868-05:00Divine piece, flowing as sweetly as the river runn...Divine piece, flowing as sweetly as the river running through its inspiration. Vivid, unique description; the imagery catches the mind's eye beautifully. A fine way to bring the picture into words - nature personified.Chris G.http://cianphelan.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-36267965805783477552010-11-21T23:27:34.812-05:002010-11-21T23:27:34.812-05:00i love the perspective you took and how you focuse...i love the perspective you took and how you focused on the details of such a vastness shown...beautiful and thought-provoking. thanks:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13159150789704724833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-34931796163970538392010-11-21T22:56:22.786-05:002010-11-21T22:56:22.786-05:00Oh, time. Moving mountains and all that. I have su...Oh, time. Moving mountains and all that. I have such little patience. But these beautiful words help. Thanks, Maureen.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263995875732832349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-74717670211753251662010-11-21T22:42:53.918-05:002010-11-21T22:42:53.918-05:00i was too sundayful to take part.
your poem is su...i was too sundayful to take part.<br /><br />your poem is super fancy and cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-14495985929900971472010-11-21T18:41:36.114-05:002010-11-21T18:41:36.114-05:00I love the first line. Best poem I've read onl...I love the first line. Best poem I've read online this year.Simon Hayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09384384882217609761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-9122202640658818832010-11-21T17:31:32.274-05:002010-11-21T17:31:32.274-05:00I, too, was in with the first line ... the majesty...I, too, was in with the first line ... the majesty and power of it.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-31435658231442873362010-11-21T17:26:43.395-05:002010-11-21T17:26:43.395-05:00I love those first two lines, too (and the allusio...I love those first two lines, too (and the allusion to A River Runs Through It!), and also these two:<br /><br />whittling rough-rouged cheeks to pock-mark//the landscape with beauty strangely held.<br /><br />Wow. What a fine poem!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-11040674892901232332010-11-21T17:25:54.759-05:002010-11-21T17:25:54.759-05:00Love the descriptors, the imagery... especially th...Love the descriptors, the imagery... especially the first lines. Well done.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40842418408400122332010-11-21T15:31:58.351-05:002010-11-21T15:31:58.351-05:00oh, this is breathtakingly beautiful, with finely ...oh, this is breathtakingly beautiful, with finely honed images throughout - I was hooked from the first line:<br /><br /><em>Breath blew a mountain<br /> inside out, and let a river run through it.</em><br /><br />- that is one huge line!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-15198670880713608872010-11-21T15:02:23.338-05:002010-11-21T15:02:23.338-05:00such alchemy indeed ~ 'pock marks' # chise...such alchemy indeed ~ 'pock marks' # chiselled to a 'majestic' scene ~ how well you captured the spirit of time and beauty ~ wonderful take<br /> ~ Lib ~libithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53997137046738311122010-11-21T14:25:03.339-05:002010-11-21T14:25:03.339-05:00I love the first two lines, caught my attention fr...I love the first two lines, caught my attention from beginning to end. Gigi Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-73564711701130637862010-11-21T14:11:39.659-05:002010-11-21T14:11:39.659-05:00Lots of clarity and light, images that walk away w...Lots of clarity and light, images that walk away with the landscape.."beauty strangely held.." "praying the sign fine" made me go back and read it just one more time for the nicely crafted march to the conclusion.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-11542468987364310732010-11-21T13:52:10.444-05:002010-11-21T13:52:10.444-05:00You had me at the very first line, Maureen. And I ...You had me at the very first line, Maureen. And I didn't need the picture to know exactly what you were describing! Excellent, beautiful poem. I do so love your poetry!Amihttp://poetrynprogress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84927554014516773262010-11-21T13:52:01.711-05:002010-11-21T13:52:01.711-05:00Majestic lines that have a windswept tone. Enjoyed...Majestic lines that have a windswept tone. Enjoyed the focus on detail from riverun to personification. "alchemy of spirits w/time" Fine poem.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com