tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post8071266736751421452..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Woods Are Full of Webs (Poems)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84687158081023161472011-06-01T22:10:20.494-04:002011-06-01T22:10:20.494-04:00Wonderful word play, carefully and precisely chose...Wonderful word play, carefully and precisely chosen as your words always are. The shadorma stanzas perfectly mirroring the excellent woodland image.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-19635754127954266942011-06-01T12:34:47.461-04:002011-06-01T12:34:47.461-04:00Intricate things in their fringed peripheries! We ...Intricate things in their fringed peripheries! We have hard lessons to learn from them.Cheryl Snellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00282790491003471641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-11938764729568876892011-06-01T08:35:25.109-04:002011-06-01T08:35:25.109-04:00I saw a golden strand of the preyers across the wi...I saw a golden strand of the preyers across the window of my car on my way to work yesterday. They are very busy laying their lines down. I hope very soon to take my children into the forest to enjoy the wonders of nature such as this.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-18739726004323002182011-06-01T04:28:46.338-04:002011-06-01T04:28:46.338-04:00I look forward to the golden orbs in the meadow an...I look forward to the golden orbs in the meadow and will remember "imperfect wheels of fortune" — perfect image!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-72500075001986536632011-06-01T00:40:40.034-04:002011-06-01T00:40:40.034-04:00You are so amazing!You are so amazing!Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-14610949062392197332011-05-31T21:18:07.128-04:002011-05-31T21:18:07.128-04:00Reverent and hushed...wonderful.Reverent and hushed...wonderful.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68687518868185738742011-05-31T20:16:59.054-04:002011-05-31T20:16:59.054-04:00Lovely words!Lovely words!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-17537869425101413052011-05-31T20:09:44.049-04:002011-05-31T20:09:44.049-04:00You've managed the subtle feel of meter along ...You've managed the subtle feel of meter along with the precision of word choice and made it all sing together in this exacting but rewarding form, one of my favorites. An excellent play on words in the last line.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-29461317189923882532011-05-31T20:08:20.755-04:002011-05-31T20:08:20.755-04:00My morning walk, through the woods, has mused the ...My morning walk, through the woods, has mused the thoughts you've expressed. I wonder... am I the prey?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53312475855631830102011-05-31T20:03:46.269-04:002011-05-31T20:03:46.269-04:00Hate it when its my nose that blunders in.Hate it when its my nose that blunders in.patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07963681874174015655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40749614948974834512011-05-31T19:43:03.868-04:002011-05-31T19:43:03.868-04:00Sad getting caught in a web. Well done with this c...Sad getting caught in a web. Well done with this creative piece.<br /><br />Bless!Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-85759850193645628712011-05-31T19:32:31.729-04:002011-05-31T19:32:31.729-04:00Yes the webs we weave
And the trails we leave
Prov...Yes the webs we weave<br />And the trails we leave<br />Providing all that we have spun<br />Enjoyed your read lots of funPat Hatthttp://rhymetime24.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-29943630347325988502011-05-31T18:47:53.898-04:002011-05-31T18:47:53.898-04:00I find webs in those words as well, silk spun into...I find webs in those words as well, silk spun into such a stunning piece.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-15047919580010036212011-05-31T18:25:54.919-04:002011-05-31T18:25:54.919-04:00you've spun a beautiful web of words here...you've spun a beautiful web of words here...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-51385571691678325752011-05-31T18:06:27.153-04:002011-05-31T18:06:27.153-04:00Maureen, you spin some wonderful words in this, in...Maureen, you spin some wonderful words in this, including this:<br /><br />"spun from leaf<br />to limb, threads<br />holding fast to a last breath<br />what blunders in silk"<br /><br />The juxtaposition of blunder and silk -- I adore, that is, delight in thinking of something so wonderous (silk!), blundered.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-41723508589553952112011-05-31T18:00:12.280-04:002011-05-31T18:00:12.280-04:00what webs we find ourselves in when we wander thro...what webs we find ourselves in when we wander through our own woods...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-47538491390541078712011-05-31T17:22:38.552-04:002011-05-31T17:22:38.552-04:00Great wordplay here. Truly enjoyed this.Great wordplay here. Truly enjoyed this.markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-1760614208563590652011-05-31T17:18:34.602-04:002011-05-31T17:18:34.602-04:00A most unlucky trip indeed...and one they only mak...A most unlucky trip indeed...and one they only make once. Beautiful scene capture.Chris G.http://cianphelan.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-16434829126922109602011-05-31T17:14:08.030-04:002011-05-31T17:14:08.030-04:00Thanks for taking me into the woods with you!Thanks for taking me into the woods with you!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-78855963037033751452011-05-31T14:00:00.516-04:002011-05-31T14:00:00.516-04:00"unlucky
insects trip
imperfect wheels of for..."unlucky<br />insects trip<br />imperfect wheels of fortune"<br /><br />really delightful!Kelly Sauerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14138861838948184728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84304349141290277542011-05-31T13:04:02.492-04:002011-05-31T13:04:02.492-04:00lovely!lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02595848781243129508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-26115990631783643192011-05-31T12:16:11.702-04:002011-05-31T12:16:11.702-04:00This is stunning ...This is stunning ...S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-6277238548167505512011-05-31T11:47:21.666-04:002011-05-31T11:47:21.666-04:00Again you have selected a beautiful image and word...Again you have selected a beautiful image and words!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.com