tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post9218025201101153065..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: No Easy Solace (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-47279779849533966452010-08-27T17:49:04.643-04:002010-08-27T17:49:04.643-04:00It is not easy, this finding of solace. Harder yet...It is not easy, this finding of solace. Harder yet is keeping it intact within those wounded heart walls.<br /><br />Such a visually beautiful piece of writing.<br /><br />Blessings.SimplyDarlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11716840701917741674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-66870630267113132272010-08-26T08:39:12.144-04:002010-08-26T08:39:12.144-04:00there are so many lovely lines to chose from...a t...there are so many lovely lines to chose from...a tincture of time tops of for me though..thanks for sharing with one shot..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-42133749006196209012010-08-26T01:58:27.619-04:002010-08-26T01:58:27.619-04:00Lovely imagery, and very well chosen words...
Thi...Lovely imagery, and very well chosen words... <br />This was a beautiful (albeit full of pain) and heartfelt poem...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-60081584504758285282010-08-25T21:13:26.626-04:002010-08-25T21:13:26.626-04:00Rich and suggestive images. Keeps the mind opening...Rich and suggestive images. Keeps the mind opening. Thank you for this. - BillBill Cookhttp://www.beginningpoetry.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-20120450615341562172010-08-25T17:57:51.852-04:002010-08-25T17:57:51.852-04:00Very nice. I especially liked the lines "...t...Very nice. I especially liked the lines "...to memory once blacked<br />and blued."PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-64559943705984225962010-08-25T16:25:30.117-04:002010-08-25T16:25:30.117-04:00In the last stage of grief, solace and acceptance....In the last stage of grief, solace and acceptance. Even grief rusts and is consumed..all to dust and in the dust is peace. Your poem is eloquent, multi-layered, and absolute. Thank you.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-10586946706308055622010-08-25T13:35:40.707-04:002010-08-25T13:35:40.707-04:00Truly a LOVEly poem!Truly a LOVEly poem!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-45501721116859948052010-08-25T10:19:16.632-04:002010-08-25T10:19:16.632-04:00I find a balance between wonderful imagery, allusi...I find a balance between wonderful imagery, allusions, and overall message of hope to find solace in this piece— which cannot be easy given the context of black & blue memories... yet possible. thanks for sharing your poem. Enjoyed it very much.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68539427078161657242010-08-25T10:06:12.176-04:002010-08-25T10:06:12.176-04:00beautiful imagery....expecially like the crocheted...beautiful imagery....expecially like the crocheted like a spiders web...solace is there...one just has to look at times...thanks for linking up to oneshot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-36986839157172216282010-08-25T00:47:12.393-04:002010-08-25T00:47:12.393-04:00There is solace just not in the things man thinks ...There is solace just not in the things man thinks are valuable. <br />Very nice piece Maureen<br /><br />thanks for sharing at One Shot<br /><br />moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-92019920689890486522010-08-24T23:35:46.445-04:002010-08-24T23:35:46.445-04:00"crocheted
as from a spider's womb" ..."crocheted<br />as from a spider's womb" - stunning imagery<br /><br />I feel the hope seeping from this poem. It's beautiful.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-12089520046083542512010-08-24T22:44:51.722-04:002010-08-24T22:44:51.722-04:00i like this one..thank you for sharing with one sh...i like this one..thank you for sharing with one shot :)) tincture ha..mmmm..love it :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-65254775546355970292010-08-23T09:57:40.694-04:002010-08-23T09:57:40.694-04:00I liked the tincture of time.
That is such a cool...I liked the tincture of time.<br /><br />That is such a cool word. :) Tincture, tincture, tincture.L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-61348183595894395212010-08-23T09:37:28.383-04:002010-08-23T09:37:28.383-04:00Maureen- I appreciate the way you approached this:...Maureen- I appreciate the way you approached this: "No easy solace"; rather than assuming we all are easing into it. Finding solace isn't easy all the time. <br /><br />Love the first lines in this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-83717253950381097352010-08-22T23:26:55.215-04:002010-08-22T23:26:55.215-04:00Very nice. Thank you for this.Very nice. Thank you for this.Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-73158685937869613102010-08-22T20:19:37.581-04:002010-08-22T20:19:37.581-04:00"blacked and blued" is so beautiful!"blacked and blued" is so beautiful!Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-18864619710045525572010-08-22T17:54:47.615-04:002010-08-22T17:54:47.615-04:00I love the images -- from Matthew, the spider'...I love the images -- from Matthew, the spider's "crocheting," the "tincture of time."Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.com