Monday, August 30, 2010

Learning to Communicate (Poem)

Learning to Communicate

Go ahead,
now!

Trace that line
of thought

between your first point
and your next

and be prepared
to scrimmage.

I know you know
somewhere

down the line
somebody's always ready

to draw a line
to hold a line

to bring you
into line.

That's not my line.

So drop it!
Don't take that line

with me.
For once

put yourself on the line
and stand

where I stand:
on no line

not in the line of duty.

I know you know
you have to

get out
of line

to cross a line
to see

how a line
can curve

can cut in
then go out again

even before
too fine

a line gets made.

Yes, we all have
to take a turn

getting back
in line

with what's expected.

But first
give me

any line you want;
spin it out

and reel it back.
You're sure to line up

with the best of 'em
so long as you vow

to keep the line open.

© 2010 Maureen E. Doallas
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I wrote this poem for Carry on Tuesday, which each week provides a prompt that participants are to use wholly or partly in an original poem or prose piece.

The prompt for Tuesday, August 31, comes from the first words of the famous Frank and Nancy Sinatra song Something Stupid (1967): "I know I stand in line . . . ."

To read other Carry on Tuesday contributors' poems or prose for Prompt #69, go here.

27 comments:

  1. I like this very much. And might I ask ...

    spare me drawing a line in the sand
    for once drawn I must hold it
    until it or I are given to God's breath

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  2. this one is really fun to read.

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  3. had such a good time reading this and imagining the various things that go on here !!! :)

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  4. Profound, yet highly amusing - you have a way with words!

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  5. oh wow - never seen such an accumulation of lines…clever!

    mine is here

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  6. What a fun poem! I enjoyed every line. :)

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  7. Hi Maureen-- I like that your saucy side shows in this-- brava! x J

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  8. This was fun and very sharp - should I call them crisp lines? :)

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  9. this was a very fun read...i like the allusion to the scrimmage because it provided a nice visual as i read the rest of it and yes communication is like that...nice one shot!

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  10. witty..clever..and entertaining,enjoying it very much..great one shot! :)

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  11. Way to tow the line

    and thanks for sharing with One Shot Wednesday Poetry

    Moon smiles

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  12. hhmmmm, these lines
    I had a great time!

    Thanks!

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  13. Loved your lines. You have a way with words

    Of course, silly me - you have been doing this for 30 years and going on strong.

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  14. I enjoyed the interplay of 'line' in this piece Maureen -- remarkable the varied perspectives of a simple 'four-letter' word, and the depth they can bring to a poem...

    ...rob

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  15. some excellent lines LOL...a great piece..cheers pete

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  16. Okay, I'll just sit here and toe the line... LOL!

    I like the recurring line lines!

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  17. This poem was the shortest distance between two points and I traveled its gauntlet and was whacked by the many meanings of that one word...quite the line. Thanks for that.

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  18. Brilliant line-up, words walking a tightrope, and in the end - there is no line. Of course not...

    I love the lightness, I hear the more serious undertone, a joy to read down to the last line. And then again.

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  19. A fine line. I enjoyed the way you spun around the topic. Nice write. - Bill

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  20. This one may be one of my favorites of yours, Maureen, and that's saying something.

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  21. Beautiful poem Maureen and a very lovely blog.

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  22. You know what The Arab says in Saroyan's The Time of Your Life:

    No foundation...

    all the way down the line.

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