Go ahead,
now!
Trace that line
of thought
between your first point
and your next
and be prepared
to scrimmage.
I know you know
somewhere
down the line
somebody's always ready
to draw a line
to hold a line
to bring you
into line.
That's not my line.
So drop it!
Don't take that line
with me.
For once
put yourself on the line
and stand
where I stand:
on no line
not in the line of duty.
I know you know
you have to
get out
of line
to cross a line
to see
how a line
can curve
can cut in
then go out again
even before
too fine
a line gets made.
Yes, we all have
to take a turn
getting back
in line
with what's expected.
But first
give me
any line you want;
spin it out
and reel it back.
You're sure to line up
with the best of 'em
so long as you vow
to keep the line open.
© 2010 Maureen E. Doallas
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I wrote this poem for Carry on Tuesday, which each week provides a prompt that participants are to use wholly or partly in an original poem or prose piece.
The prompt for Tuesday, August 31, comes from the first words of the famous Frank and Nancy Sinatra song Something Stupid (1967): "I know I stand in line . . . ."
To read other Carry on Tuesday contributors' poems or prose for Prompt #69, go here.
I like this very much. And might I ask ...
ReplyDeletespare me drawing a line in the sand
for once drawn I must hold it
until it or I are given to God's breath
this one is really fun to read.
ReplyDeletehad such a good time reading this and imagining the various things that go on here !!! :)
ReplyDeleteProfound, yet highly amusing - you have a way with words!
ReplyDeleteWhat a line!
ReplyDeleteWhat fun!
oh wow - never seen such an accumulation of lines…clever!
ReplyDeletemine is here
What a fun poem! I enjoyed every line. :)
ReplyDeletevery clever! i liked this!
ReplyDeleteHi Maureen-- I like that your saucy side shows in this-- brava! x J
ReplyDeleteThis was fun and very sharp - should I call them crisp lines? :)
ReplyDeletethis was a very fun read...i like the allusion to the scrimmage because it provided a nice visual as i read the rest of it and yes communication is like that...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteyes many clever lines...bkm
ReplyDeletewitty..clever..and entertaining,enjoying it very much..great one shot! :)
ReplyDeleteWay to tow the line
ReplyDeleteand thanks for sharing with One Shot Wednesday Poetry
Moon smiles
Enjoyed the fun in this one.
ReplyDeleteMy poem is here.
hhmmmm, these lines
ReplyDeleteI had a great time!
Thanks!
Loved your lines. You have a way with words
ReplyDeleteOf course, silly me - you have been doing this for 30 years and going on strong.
I enjoyed the interplay of 'line' in this piece Maureen -- remarkable the varied perspectives of a simple 'four-letter' word, and the depth they can bring to a poem...
ReplyDelete...rob
some excellent lines LOL...a great piece..cheers pete
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'll just sit here and toe the line... LOL!
ReplyDeleteI like the recurring line lines!
This poem was the shortest distance between two points and I traveled its gauntlet and was whacked by the many meanings of that one word...quite the line. Thanks for that.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant line-up, words walking a tightrope, and in the end - there is no line. Of course not...
ReplyDeleteI love the lightness, I hear the more serious undertone, a joy to read down to the last line. And then again.
I could see the seriousness in this.
ReplyDeletecurling and uncurling
A fine line. I enjoyed the way you spun around the topic. Nice write. - Bill
ReplyDeleteThis one may be one of my favorites of yours, Maureen, and that's saying something.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Maureen and a very lovely blog.
ReplyDeleteYou know what The Arab says in Saroyan's The Time of Your Life:
ReplyDeleteNo foundation...
all the way down the line.