tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post1031147503739273578..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Consequence (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-61036277831001608082011-04-28T15:12:22.155-04:002011-04-28T15:12:22.155-04:00Your work is like a fine sculpture, each curve see...Your work is like a fine sculpture, each curve seeming natural and the overall effect has delicate nuances that touch something and some place unnamed deep within. I'm always richer as a person having read your work. You're a magician!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-62398963903881429562011-04-27T05:03:49.124-04:002011-04-27T05:03:49.124-04:00many fine nuances heremany fine nuances hereJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-61118798563806833862011-04-26T22:44:05.107-04:002011-04-26T22:44:05.107-04:00I enjoyed the gentle rhythm and soft sounds of thi...I enjoyed the gentle rhythm and soft sounds of this poem - I almost felt like I was in a rocking chair whilst reading, and soothed in soul.Elizabeth Younghttp://gardengatewares@gmail.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-45582342058425866262011-04-26T20:51:31.696-04:002011-04-26T20:51:31.696-04:00I gather there is something much deeper between wo...I gather there is something much deeper between words and stanza's here as Hedgewitch stated...the the parse and parcel of each line holds a myriad of meanings...that you leave for the reader to ponder...the sum and parts --being my favorite aspect...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-38271723231317615352011-04-26T18:24:18.483-04:002011-04-26T18:24:18.483-04:00Three readings and I don't believe I've fa...Three readings and I don't believe I've fathomed all the nuance here, but the portrait is a finely drawn one, achingly so.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68291650287197196572011-04-26T17:56:45.765-04:002011-04-26T17:56:45.765-04:00...before the next time becomes the next time
I l......before the next time becomes the next time<br /><br />I love the gracious words that could have been stronger more painful. This piece allows for failure and success<br /><br />Beauty always exudes from your touchmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55997785022121500872011-04-26T17:54:32.762-04:002011-04-26T17:54:32.762-04:00excellent cadence to this maureen...a rather enjoy...excellent cadence to this maureen...a rather enjoyable read...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-7544570325740642011-04-26T17:09:24.967-04:002011-04-26T17:09:24.967-04:00katdish said it well. The form is graceful, breath...katdish said it well. The form is graceful, breathes well. I read it outloud and it read so naturally. This would be one of my new favorites. :)Kathleen Overbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12684519598333961438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-45964044947861689072011-04-26T16:13:53.781-04:002011-04-26T16:13:53.781-04:00A great use of direct address, especially when con...A great use of direct address, especially when considering the lack of a poetic "Gestalt" so to speak. Also, many fine examples of wordplay and plays off the sound of lines.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-25064231092399672312011-04-26T16:12:06.198-04:002011-04-26T16:12:06.198-04:00It moves, taking you on a journey, with rhtythm an...It moves, taking you on a journey, with rhtythm and cadence. Excellent poem, Maureen.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-48163307407460475172011-04-26T16:08:04.703-04:002011-04-26T16:08:04.703-04:00What I love so much about your poetry is that you ...What I love so much about your poetry is that you leave spaces for the reader to place their hearts. That's what all great writing should do. Thank you.katdishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09210738418270395622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-48550564978688925912011-04-26T16:05:09.712-04:002011-04-26T16:05:09.712-04:00i scrubbed the kitchen sink
now i am about to go t...i scrubbed the kitchen sink<br />now i am about to go to the the post office...<br /><br />echoing terrill, you gave a sweet moment of love.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-89962532937003926242011-04-26T13:47:43.450-04:002011-04-26T13:47:43.450-04:00Maureen this poem touch something deep inside me a...Maureen this poem touch something deep inside me as I go about my day and drawing attention to the issue of extracting natural gas using hydraulic fracturing. Thank you for your usual brilliance. <br /><br />TerrillCreative Potagerhttp://creativepotager.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-92071562841877669302011-04-26T12:14:44.974-04:002011-04-26T12:14:44.974-04:00Yes lovely.
There is spring and magic in other ex...Yes lovely.<br /><br />There is spring and magic in other expressions than poetry! And then you manage to convey "his" with your own.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84508093058721434172011-04-26T12:14:39.364-04:002011-04-26T12:14:39.364-04:00I like the rhythm of this ...I like the rhythm of this ...S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39569361241856394022011-04-26T08:21:41.624-04:002011-04-26T08:21:41.624-04:00Lovely Maureen.
Lovely Poem.
And spring rises, ...Lovely Maureen. <br /><br />Lovely Poem.<br /><br />And spring rises, better late than never, in fields and in hearts.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.com