tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post1600396074513680572..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Not a Rush (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-26869410323460629092009-10-23T15:58:35.709-04:002009-10-23T15:58:35.709-04:00Love how this is paced -- fast - then slowing - th...Love how this is paced -- fast - then slowing - then slow. Beautiful use of the words to do that.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-87027964812023632912009-10-23T14:37:44.942-04:002009-10-23T14:37:44.942-04:00to run calm at the surface,
no matter the storm be...to run calm at the surface,<br />no matter the storm below<br /><br />ooooh.... wonderful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02587382812669823711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-48236588302764577882009-10-23T10:14:43.312-04:002009-10-23T10:14:43.312-04:00Hello Maureen, your beautiful poem brought back me...Hello Maureen, your beautiful poem brought back memories of a piece my daughter wrote about forgiveness. "Forgiveness is a river, the water can’t go back. Only forwards, over the waterfall, straight into love."<br /><br />I love, <br /><br />Water recalls, <br />quiet-like<br />what it's like<br />to be rocked<br />with a new mother's promises.<br /><br />We all need to recall like water the promises of love.<br /><br />Thank you for your beauty and genoristy of spirit.<br /><br />Louiselouiseg88@gmail.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-39091115613912868162009-10-23T06:19:21.099-04:002009-10-23T06:19:21.099-04:00Lovely, Maureen.
Such a gift of images with words...Lovely, Maureen.<br /><br />Such a gift of images with words. I also like the line of "calm at the surface no matter the storm below" <br /><br />Soothing, yet stirring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-45672886253123087482009-10-22T17:33:14.586-04:002009-10-22T17:33:14.586-04:00...am in awe :)
I love this line:
"to run ca......am in awe :)<br /><br />I love this line:<br />"to run calm at the surface,<br />no matter the storm below"<br />Very thought provoking to my heart today.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this...I enjoyed reading it.<br />BinaBinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04012123935576820284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-77957888622576609122009-10-22T17:07:50.435-04:002009-10-22T17:07:50.435-04:00Wow! I am speechless. Actually that is quite a p...Wow! I am speechless. Actually that is quite a problem when you want to leave a comment..Helenhttp://www.randommusings-helen.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-41499842791478014492009-10-22T16:28:41.217-04:002009-10-22T16:28:41.217-04:00Well, can I say it? This is quite sexy...
"t...Well, can I say it? This is quite sexy...<br /><br />"the way love can hover<br />and get your back up.<br /><br />When it somehow<br />knows to lull"<br /><br />Personally, I think Christians should write more of this kind of poetry. :)L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.com