tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post1662926666276521445..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: A Memory Sneaks Off (Cento)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-44989402307525738322012-07-11T19:46:53.112-04:002012-07-11T19:46:53.112-04:00Your abilities leave me a bit speechless at times....Your abilities leave me a bit speechless at times.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-43203239144552664462012-07-10T23:59:09.528-04:002012-07-10T23:59:09.528-04:00oh wow -- this is spectacular!
For me, this parag...oh wow -- this is spectacular!<br /><br />For me, this paragraph grabbed me...<br /><br />And now: it is easy to forget<br />the walk with eyes closed along the edge of the cliff,<br /> and verbena in submarine gardens,<br />the remains of everything consumed<br />at the altar of surrender.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-10184456366364867672012-07-10T23:35:04.003-04:002012-07-10T23:35:04.003-04:00Such a clever poem - I cannot believe you have mad...Such a clever poem - I cannot believe you have made such a seamless mosaic. k.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-65970170171837296602012-07-10T16:49:18.716-04:002012-07-10T16:49:18.716-04:00Maureen, excellent writing! I always look forward...Maureen, excellent writing! I always look forward to reading your work as I learn something new. So grateful for your willingness to share with others. Thank you!<br /><br />Also, the collage poetry is amazing. How very cool it is that you share words and lines of poets around you and reconstruct into a new meaning! Love this idea....<br /><br />This line really stood out for me, <br />"The heart astonished to find belonging weighs nothing."<br /><br />I love this stanza --<br />Because we cannot know, we imagine<br />how there can be a place<br />to speak against the daily sinking flame.<br /><br />Thanks.Joan Barrett Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08078385285085867796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-86058982435273004302012-07-10T16:04:26.580-04:002012-07-10T16:04:26.580-04:00this made me think of those that feel like they wi...this made me think of those that feel like they will never fit...never be good enough and certainly never accepted...kinda like going to church that first time...or first in a long time...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-51675244910687273682012-07-10T15:38:10.561-04:002012-07-10T15:38:10.561-04:00Nicely accomplished. It's reminiscent in style...Nicely accomplished. It's reminiscent in style to today's poem of the day from the Poetry Foundation - not, as far as I know, a cento, but of a kind: Karen Volkman's "[I never wish to sing again as I used to . . .]"<br /><br />http://www.tumblr.com/tagged/karen-volkmanthe sad red earthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03274385814146546329noreply@blogger.com