tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post2453959949591219655..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Apple Picking (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-57578871230867085572012-10-24T22:49:03.077-04:002012-10-24T22:49:03.077-04:00Distinctive and beautiful, Maureen-- the effect of...Distinctive and beautiful, Maureen-- the effect of the spaces between couplets is of falling in slow motion-- somewhere Marisha Chamberlain has a poem about apple picking I used to love-- I heard her read it numerous times way back when... xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-3373418157563350162012-10-24T07:55:23.151-04:002012-10-24T07:55:23.151-04:00Lovely!Lovely!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-32180453389403371802012-10-24T00:19:04.943-04:002012-10-24T00:19:04.943-04:00Yes - things are usually ripe for the picking not ...Yes - things are usually ripe for the picking not for the falling! k.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-52465635343209222152012-10-24T00:18:36.714-04:002012-10-24T00:18:36.714-04:00Yes - things are usually ripe for the picking not ...Yes - things are usually ripe for the picking not for the falling! k. Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-43007134596682910922012-10-23T22:24:14.135-04:002012-10-23T22:24:14.135-04:00With brevity and clipped cadence you impart a full...With brevity and clipped cadence you impart a full sense of the apple experience.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-24395703230653606512012-10-23T21:46:52.938-04:002012-10-23T21:46:52.938-04:00... and the cycle continues... and the cycle continuesWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53222362277124449032012-10-23T20:55:08.599-04:002012-10-23T20:55:08.599-04:00As dry and crisp as October night, dark too, but n...As dry and crisp as October night, dark too, but not without the light of hope in the giving and receiving earth.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-13138264162541959712012-10-23T20:44:50.760-04:002012-10-23T20:44:50.760-04:00You've made me see a whole orchard... such pea...You've made me see a whole orchard... such peaceful calm, such sweet delights waiting to be fulfilled when joined with our lips, the union that comes with eating... Lovely poem.Serenahttp://www.serenahelriot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-14160770137750635852012-10-23T17:20:05.494-04:002012-10-23T17:20:05.494-04:00the vine sheds what makes no wine...there is an om...the vine sheds what makes no wine...there is an ominous truth in that...gravity does the pruning...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-55500224733083989982012-10-23T17:15:53.815-04:002012-10-23T17:15:53.815-04:00Waiting for us to share it.Waiting for us to share it.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-86473199724031341372012-10-23T12:03:15.729-04:002012-10-23T12:03:15.729-04:00i am now thinking of a cool, crisp, juicy, sweet a...i am now thinking of a cool, crisp, juicy, sweet apple just hanging on my tree waiting for me to go out and pick it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com