tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post4059045385853581282..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Let Rain (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-49427745597459657542012-05-17T12:25:45.266-04:002012-05-17T12:25:45.266-04:00Really enjoyed the journey here Maureen... great s...Really enjoyed the journey here Maureen... great selection of language and form.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-38504796155873585582012-05-16T15:22:59.201-04:002012-05-16T15:22:59.201-04:00I love how you get "inside" the rain, dr...I love how you get "inside" the rain, drawing a parallel world with subjective experience. The sense of unity between the two is wonderfully fulfilling, providing a reflective state of mind that reflects so much of the soul's life.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-82632470790489262402012-05-16T08:48:57.435-04:002012-05-16T08:48:57.435-04:00Love the rain.
Really really love this poem -- es...Love the rain.<br /><br />Really really love this poem -- especially spoken!Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-3347648320712963772012-05-16T07:14:50.825-04:002012-05-16T07:14:50.825-04:00Your images are so very strong and well in command...Your images are so very strong and well in command here, polished to a high level of clarity, which is, of course, what poems are supposed to do. I really like the way they make me see and feel something new, yet familiar about rain at the same time. When you offer that master class, count me in.Rob Mustardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09210194364918460896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-27371789814701788282012-05-15T22:36:58.348-04:002012-05-15T22:36:58.348-04:00I want to dance naked in this...I want to dance naked in this...Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-69297934587476583592012-05-15T21:45:39.193-04:002012-05-15T21:45:39.193-04:00loved this unexpected
rain & life & earth ...loved this unexpected<br />rain & life & earth <br />renewal!Joan Barrett Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08078385285085867796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-17192187394588653562012-05-15T17:29:21.634-04:002012-05-15T17:29:21.634-04:00I read it aloud and loved the sound of it, then pl...I read it aloud and loved the sound of it, then played your recording and heard it again, read with a different beat and sound, and loved it again. :)chrishttp://chrisgalvinwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-40330583326066519522012-05-15T17:13:53.492-04:002012-05-15T17:13:53.492-04:00Landscape with rain, perfectly painted.Landscape with rain, perfectly painted.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68618138670473506262012-05-15T17:02:22.191-04:002012-05-15T17:02:22.191-04:00Vulnerability, and a sense, almost, of resurrectio...Vulnerability, and a sense, almost, of resurrection...so much beauty held within that rain. It soothes the pains, the battering dry wastes that time or other souls may sometime wreak...Chris G.https://cianphelan.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-38879149251370376562012-05-15T16:58:54.194-04:002012-05-15T16:58:54.194-04:00and that shelter may not always be a good thing, i...and that shelter may not always be a good thing, if rain finds its way to bring life...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-3322967782614195612012-05-15T14:28:21.374-04:002012-05-15T14:28:21.374-04:00shelter
feathers
and wings
together they
hold an...shelter<br />feathers <br />and wings<br />together they <br />hold and warm<br />reach for the skyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-68149258513972707432012-05-15T13:57:52.029-04:002012-05-15T13:57:52.029-04:00Like this on many levels.Like this on many levels.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-33538876892944136102012-05-15T09:28:08.199-04:002012-05-15T09:28:08.199-04:00Ah, rain!Ah, rain!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06559881249054540947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-67965698480663039792012-05-15T06:38:00.507-04:002012-05-15T06:38:00.507-04:00Great, varied textures in your poem, Maureen. Rain...Great, varied textures in your poem, Maureen. Rain is a welcome miracle, but also a companion of storm.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.com