tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post5238690416299760190..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Holding Hands (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-32057018969031342772010-11-27T01:12:15.945-05:002010-11-27T01:12:15.945-05:00Dear Maureen
Hand seeking hand.. what a beautiful ...Dear Maureen<br />Hand seeking hand.. what a beautiful line... I enjoyed the vividness of the words and the emotions that are so beautifully portrayed in this ...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-50843883249673165862010-11-25T11:11:56.912-05:002010-11-25T11:11:56.912-05:00this is beautiful - so much in holding hands...and...this is beautiful - so much in holding hands...and i also liked the pic..looks almost as if the trees want to hold hands as well..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-6106654334585670122010-11-24T18:17:39.003-05:002010-11-24T18:17:39.003-05:00A great deal of layering to your poem, which fits ...A great deal of layering to your poem, which fits the form like interlaced fingers holding hands. And as much as I enjoyed the use of form, the expression of finding love pervades overall, making the hand holding image all the more poignant. One of my favorite poems of yours. Happy Thanksgiving.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-36760092626437163392010-11-24T15:16:03.887-05:002010-11-24T15:16:03.887-05:00Such a beautifully written piece, I almost forgot ...Such a beautifully written piece, I almost forgot to breath while reading…. a pleasure to read your writing!Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-17703101991969258372010-11-24T15:04:30.036-05:002010-11-24T15:04:30.036-05:00An excellent rhythm in this form. Found it a very ...An excellent rhythm in this form. Found it a very enjoyable sound in the head. Also love romance and the use of repetition. Left, left (joy for a left-handed person!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-21962086581404632562010-11-24T13:51:35.162-05:002010-11-24T13:51:35.162-05:00No complaints here, Maureen... Nice One Shot!No complaints here, Maureen... Nice One Shot!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-79260258907700332722010-11-24T12:17:36.859-05:002010-11-24T12:17:36.859-05:00Nice use of the form; I'd just dimly heard of ...Nice use of the form; I'd just dimly heard of it, but seeing it used brings out how subtly it moves the images forward. Very nicely done.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-86287817660588810002010-11-24T11:36:17.536-05:002010-11-24T11:36:17.536-05:00i am lucky...my daughter is 6 and my youngest son ...i am lucky...my daughter is 6 and my youngest son is two...i so love being able to still hold their hands and they love holding mine..which they find so huge!!! a lovely write and have a happy thanksgiving..cheers peteOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-82233573637001027502010-11-24T10:46:07.934-05:002010-11-24T10:46:07.934-05:00I almost missed this gentle one ... so glad I didn...I almost missed this gentle one ... so glad I didn't.<br /><br />When my son was very young and felt threatened by a doctor's visit or the like he would always say, "Hand, hand," and reach for mine.S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53614377529213755062010-11-24T05:52:49.019-05:002010-11-24T05:52:49.019-05:00I love this-- the repetition makes for an incantat...I love this-- the repetition makes for an incantatory and mystical effect. I'll have to try it. As usual, your trademark delicacy and strength! xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-90385118768176687262010-11-24T03:41:36.458-05:002010-11-24T03:41:36.458-05:00Lovely use of repitition and circularity - you rea...Lovely use of repitition and circularity - you really do weave a spellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-38726720776139580002010-11-24T02:14:10.705-05:002010-11-24T02:14:10.705-05:00I like the discipline of form. When one is workin...I like the discipline of form. When one is working within a form, every word is chosen carefully, which adds to their power and the effectiveness of the message. Nicely done.<br /><br />My One Spot Wednesday entry is here:<br />http://shawnbird.com/2010/11/24/trus/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-31369355572291721862010-11-23T21:11:25.690-05:002010-11-23T21:11:25.690-05:00beautiful in its simple essence.beautiful in its simple essence.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17807776658547638320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-44020074164567604362010-11-23T21:03:32.651-05:002010-11-23T21:03:32.651-05:00Very nice - a sense of softness to it...and calmne...Very nice - a sense of softness to it...and calmness...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-82753026163926766892010-11-23T19:28:43.145-05:002010-11-23T19:28:43.145-05:00Hadn't heard of this poetry form before. Nice ...Hadn't heard of this poetry form before. Nice job.Strummed Wordshttp://strummedwords.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com