tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post943668916405466267..comments2024-02-03T14:41:13.330-05:00Comments on Writing Without Paper: Ariadne's Thread (Poem)Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84558614760265802622011-06-15T23:10:46.294-04:002011-06-15T23:10:46.294-04:00I love how powerful statements can be said with su...I love how powerful statements can be said with such few words. You owned this style with this poem.<br /><br />"Secure lines<br />back through hearts' recall." <br /><br />Love those wordsLaura Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02063154517087393398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-36245374868921076182011-06-15T23:09:05.630-04:002011-06-15T23:09:05.630-04:00I love how powerful statements can be said with su...I love how powerful statements can be said with such few words. You owned this style with this poem. <br /><br />"Secure lines<br />back through hearts' recall." <br /><br />love those wordsLaura Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02063154517087393398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-13023238280109812562011-06-15T13:26:55.452-04:002011-06-15T13:26:55.452-04:00Great form for this. Labyrinths tend to be long an...Great form for this. Labyrinths tend to be long and winding, yet the form is short and pyramidal. Fascinating! And wondrously clear in the telling of all that love is.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-9513636346427134292011-06-15T13:07:15.854-04:002011-06-15T13:07:15.854-04:00Beautiful rendering in Shadorma form of the intrig...Beautiful rendering in Shadorma form of the intriguing myth of the Labyrinth. This form allows us to pare down to essentials.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-11176601706802266662011-06-15T03:02:11.407-04:002011-06-15T03:02:11.407-04:00This is a wise poem about attempts to secure our h...This is a wise poem about attempts to secure our hearts. Although I know we attempt this, I wonder if it's ultimately possible... lovely poem Maureen.Elizabeth Younghttp://gardengatewares.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-53575594068415597632011-06-15T02:42:39.985-04:002011-06-15T02:42:39.985-04:00amazing Maureen..
I wonder how you are able to wr...amazing Maureen.. <br />I wonder how you are able to write such beautiful lines in Shadorma format :)Divyahttp://divyasachdeva.blog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-50303143215037638332011-06-14T23:20:58.133-04:002011-06-14T23:20:58.133-04:00What is that thread, that rope, that allows us to ...What is that thread, that rope, that allows us to find our way through the labyrinth? Wonderful poem, Maureen.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-21511270079885572902011-06-14T23:11:51.402-04:002011-06-14T23:11:51.402-04:00The poem stands alone without references as a beau...The poem stands alone without references as a beautiful work of art, but fleshed out with the classical and practical allusions it resonates even more. Excellent as always, Maureen. Thank you.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-16900990533477023362011-06-14T22:22:05.109-04:002011-06-14T22:22:05.109-04:00Short poems resonate with me. They say much in fe...Short poems resonate with me. They say much in few words.<br /><br />I particularly enjoyed the added notes that went with the poem. Great stuff...markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-29080960669880534692011-06-14T22:14:58.879-04:002011-06-14T22:14:58.879-04:00Great use of words to create vivid imagery, nice p...Great use of words to create vivid imagery, nice poem.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-48436398707786487722011-06-14T19:45:54.793-04:002011-06-14T19:45:54.793-04:00i love the imagery in your poem... and would wish ...i love the imagery in your poem... and would wish for all to know this <br /><br />"Secure lines<br />back through hearts' recall."Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01221703763145912238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-42756584713243816252011-06-14T18:11:51.759-04:002011-06-14T18:11:51.759-04:00tightly crafted poem that creates a picture I want...tightly crafted poem that creates a picture I want to exploreAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84954783974564314972011-06-14T17:55:45.902-04:002011-06-14T17:55:45.902-04:00Hi Maureen-- I love these shorter poems... these a...Hi Maureen-- I love these shorter poems... these are beautiful lines-- <br />"...doubled threads,<br />knots of trials,<br />errors, options.."<br /><br />Each image there could launch its own poem with more concretion-- How resonant and interesting-- Ariadne's Thread... xjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-84906605444467263502011-06-14T17:41:35.875-04:002011-06-14T17:41:35.875-04:00and of course that line leads back to the heart......and of course that line leads back to the heart...that more of them could remain unbroken...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-37968188027127643162011-06-14T16:17:59.791-04:002011-06-14T16:17:59.791-04:00This is intriguing ... I can visualize that "...This is intriguing ... I can visualize that "red thread".S. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2639339699258439249.post-64529518750456505282011-06-14T08:32:40.617-04:002011-06-14T08:32:40.617-04:00I'm loving your exploration of the Shadorma fo...I'm loving your exploration of the Shadorma form -- and how you weave mythology into information to create such beauty.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.com