Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Fighting Weeds (Poem)

Fighting Weeds

We sow wheat.
We pull weeds.

But think about this:
What if wheat grew

like weeds?
Not in its rows

carefully spaced
and belabored

but wildly,
without purpose

we can name;
not wanted

in its place
but sought out

to be uprooted.
Could we tell

wheat's difference then
from weeds?

Would we cultivate
a taste for it,

or go at it,
threshing out of hand?

Would it, too, resist
our tugs or once on

our tongues focus
what we hunger for?

© 2011 Maureen E. Doallas

22 comments:

  1. Fun to wonder. All our plants were once found in a forest somewhere and someone ate the first one and liked it...

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  2. What is a weed by any other name? Your poem neatly captures the mystery of this choice.

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  3. Beautiful. Shall we choke that which might feed us? Or shall we embrace the wild within?

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  4. some interesting thoughts in this..love how you use those two - the wheat and weeds as metaphors to make your point..very clever done

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  5. Would we cultivate
    a taste for it...

    love this line

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  6. ... after it's all grown... those nasty weeds can be pulled

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  7. the parable of the wheat and the tares comes to mind ...

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  8. Beautiful and carefully crafted soul-questionings, Maureen; I especially love:

    Not in its rows

    carefully spaced
    and belabored

    but wildly,
    without purpose

    we can name;

    Your work distills the essential so beautifully. xxxj

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  9. love when Im left to ponder something! Thanks! :) lovely penning as always.

    Kellie
    v

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  10. Beautiful, wise and thought-provoking words Maureen. I came by chance and will return. penny

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  11. we make judgements on what is good or bad...who is to say we would not destroy the wheat in our ignorance...

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  12. It is all indeed in the perception put before us I do suppose...judging a book by its cover and all that. Quick to judge - and worth the question. Well done!

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  13. Wheat or weed. I love how you played with this and made us think. Well done.

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  14. How very simple and how true. And a simple question, what is a weed anyway? Delightful. And wise. My father-in-law used to keep a tupperware container filled with bitter green weeds in the refrigerator. Once he came to stay and brought a week's worth. One man's weeds are the other man's dinner...

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  15. Beautifully done--perhaps weeds have a place more important or at least equally important.

    Audrey

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  16. what a difference a difference makes. Ha.
    witty & clever piece here.
    an apology for weed perceptions.
    I like the structure (in couplets) and it reads smoothly through. good job.

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  17. Dear Maureen

    "Our tongues focus
    what we hunger for... " lovely ending to an endearing journey of doubts and endeavor. I liked it very much..


    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-sighs.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  18. I loved the construction. As I read, I thought of dandelions. I love them so much and hate to see them poisoned. I like dandelion greens, and I love the sunshine flowers coming out early with the other yellow flowers and making me happy. As children we wished on them before blowing the seeds away. Certainly, it's a matter of taste. Truth in itself and a metaphor for much more.
    Always tight and exquisite work.

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  19. hmm...good question :) thought provoking!

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