Well, as often, I'm wowed by what your line-breaks achieve. Each of the 1st three lines can stand on its own; in fact, I've let myself pause at the end of each, taking in the line's image. Then each moves on, "quickening," to feed the poem's roots. "Let us dig," indeed. I notice too how "hidden…sign…unknown" all point to mystery. I feel that this poem delineates our very life.
Well, as often, I'm wowed by what your line-breaks achieve. Each of the 1st three lines can stand on its own; in fact, I've let myself pause at the end of each, taking in the line's image.
ReplyDeleteThen each moves on, "quickening," to feed the poem's roots. "Let us dig," indeed.
I notice too how "hidden…sign…unknown" all point to mystery. I feel that this poem delineates our very life.