Jacob Lucas, The Show Must Go On
© Jacob Lucas Used With Permission
After, the Evidence
Everybody wants to stage
a revolution some time,
to tear back the curtain
and reveal the wizard's hand
holding fast the tongues
wagging to expose
the content of secret files,
raw, unedited pictures
of all the principal actors
in their compromising positions.
The shocking device
found in the basement
hints at how the fire
must have scorched
what dirty white bandages
now hide,
the single application
of electrifying power
gone awry.
The show must go
on, no price too high
to pay, no loyalty
so quick to shift
our gaze from what remains
before we've destroyed
the village to save it,
leaving olive trees burning
in the Red Sea's shadows.
© 2011 Maureen E. Doallas
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I wrote this poem for today's One Shoot Sunday event at One Stop Poetry, where you'll find Chris Galford's interview with photographer Jacob Lucas whose image above is offered for Sunday's Picture Prompt Challenge.
Anyone may participate in the challenge. Go here to read the interview, then scroll down to follow the directions to contribute an original poem or piece of flash fiction inspired by the image.
12 comments:
Fabulous.
Your imagery is stunning.
And -- I love the thought for the day as well!
Beautiful, I love the movement and quickness. Each line taking you to another image and act. Very nice.
A village of peace burning down to the last of its olive trees. Is the open hands of the wizard worth the sacrifice of a community? With all truly complex pieces of writing there are no easy answers. Well executed, thought-provoking poem.
well done.
so many underlining references here to the world stage...and what is and is not exposed...so well done...bkm
Great writing, great storytelling. Exemplary work.
Brava! Outstanding prompt response.
I have just spent a few minutes contemplating the image. So it's interesting to read your interpretation of it. I love how you go in so many directions.
The world stage laid bare in such expert hands through such skillful layering of metaphor and meaning. Your work always amazes me. Your passions, so evident, are always reasoned and controlled. Your language and diction always so perfect and never better than here.
Thank you for sharing your brilliant work, Maureen! Gay
Powerful and convicting, Maureen. Excellent.
There is an apocalyptic sense to the photo - almost a wanton destruction. You caught it and framed it. WEll done, Maureen.
Point and shoot words.
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