The Bad Cook
She tried to
measure
carefully, broke
the last wish
bone cleanly
in two, even
kept the stuffing
from erupting
between the legs,
trussed-up,
the heart secure
inside. Knowing
she was no cavity
of emptiness, she
weighed the his
and hers proportions —
of salt to pepper,
rosemary to thyme,
garlic to red wine
vinegar — thinking
to let red juices run
a bit before dipping
and raising
the silver spoon
full of drippings,
coating the body,
glistening
and tender before
his serrated knife
and three-tined fork
could cut into
the too-common
pattern of tasting,
then seasoning
more. She watched
fate's slender finger
point as caress
of mouth on skin
barely managed
what the nose
already knew:
the garnish never
enough to mask
the stench of toast
burnt black for
morning's repast;
she, no longer
loving and wanting
out, recalling again
how silence
always follows
the hissing maple
honey bacon frying
in the pan she
stirred his eggs too
easy. Over words,
repeated daily
like an incantation,
often enough
to not be
heard, she
simmered long,
a turned down
flame, dismissing
what was needed
to apply more heat.
© 2011 Maureen E. Doallas
Tuesday, October 25, 2011
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This is a delightful, if sad, play of food and relationship. Delicious language, literally and figuratively!
Yes. Delicious language.
Sadness pervades
And still
the food must be made
edible.
Food and love, so intertwined
we starve
we feast
serve or deny
lovely poem Maureen!
that's it
add a little more spice
hot hot peppers
would be nice
turn up the heat
turn down the light
beat those eggs hard
then beat them twice
"A turned down flame"--so sad.
A wonderful use of symbol and comparison, so appropriate to the theme of relationship, always a recipe successfully executed only by complete serendipity or a pair of master chefs. From 'burnt toast' on I was wondering how the metaphors could keep coming at that level, and amazed at the skill with which they did.
well done... sweet and savory all together
This page is a hot griddle where tears sizzle dry
A sad, yet savory bit of language for us here - a relationship excellently engaged through the image; a tragedy to see such things burnt.
nice the food and cooking made me think of the holidays but you also brought in some nice thoughts as well regarding the relationships in our lives...nice maureen...
A heartbreaker. So easily does love slip away. Beautifully done.
I love how you used the metaphor of cooking and preparing to their dwindling fire or relationship. Subtle and beautiful write...
I love your simple yet creative take on this ~
Great how you used the metaphor so perfectly. Nice write.
I am not as clever with words as all your previous visitors, but I can tell you I thought this poem was amazing.
There's a staccato quality to this, emphasizing the breaking down of relatiionship, not to mention the problem of bad cooking. Good poem, Maureen.
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