The hour has come. Make your motion
to strike flint against tinder. Spell
the ambered flames of winterberry-warmed
candles. Truss blue-spruced limbs
with a child's expectation. Be-ribbon the sticks
of Saigon cinnamon, the aromatic gift
of anointment in the space surrounding. Inhale.
Hold. Expire, and draw near. Watchfully
await the extravagant gesture of Gabriel, herald
of the greatest show on earth. Bow your head
low, incline to accept the red-bowed wreaths
of ruah. Feel the rush in each lung, searing
inside, the way sunlight burns the moon's face
pale into the blue of another new day. Admit
your eyes within the clearing sky above. Anticipate
the pinpoint pillar of flickering light soon
to dazzle the heavenly home and rise bright as monks'
sweet voices, their chant of Veni, veni, Emanuel
trailing the midnight visit to the parish stall.
Breathe in spiritus. Fill yourself with ruah.
The breath unseen in silence keep. Holy announce
it. Ever after in wonder gladly sing.
© 2010 Maureen E. Doallas
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I offer this poem for One Stop Poetry's weekly One Shot Wednesday event. Be sure to visit the site late Tuesday afternoon and evening and every Wednesday for links to the many contributors' "one shot" poems.
25 comments:
Beautiful!
I am entranced and in awe.
The imagery resonates. I can feel it, sense it, smell it.
wow.
Lovely, Maureen. I feel I'm becomign oen with the Advent season.
Wow, Maureen. Breathtaking!!!!!
The breath of God is felt ...
Absolutely beautiful. I love your site and your poetry and other elements. http://joycespoetry.blogspot.com
Love the pagentry sense but also the personal that is right alongside for a beautiful advent experience
Thanks for the One Shot
hugs
Beautifully written, crafted, realized. Thanks for sharing this!
"The breath unseen in silence keep" Great line in an inspiring poem; expressing spiritual awareness in revealing tone. Great title too. Another great One Shot! Cheers
Like angels announcing the season is upon us Maureen, that is how I read this...let the celebration begin - a glorious write...thank you...bkm
Maureen, I can smell it and breathe it. I was elevated reading this. Nicely done, and I love your form!
This makes me breathe deeply and exhale long.
The ruah...yes.
Indeed.
Maureen, as always, your poem is moving and breathtakingly beautiful. Love and Light, Sender
Majesty sensed.
It's such a good take. Leaves a wonderful feeling. Great!
Last night my youngest played in his first Christmas concert at his school. Sitting in the cafeteria with all those other parents, I felt the Christmas season rush in with gasping tenderness. This poem is such perfect timing for me this morning, Maureen.
Beautiful.
beautiful!
Hi Maureen-- as ever, this poem is so clear and painstaking-- love Gabriel's extravagant gesture-- this is surely the season of extravagant gestures of all kinds. xxxj
A beautiful capture of winter and Christman together. I like how the trailing lines waltz us down to the next ones.
Wonderful particulars too! (winterberry-warmed candles, Saigon cinnamon, red-bowed wreaths, etc.)
A dandy seasonal One Shot, Maureen!
ah - can you hear me breathe...? beautiful maureen
...loved the winterberry-warmed candles...
Beautiful, Maureen. Like your words (and their juxtaposition, of course..)
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Angelic,
Cheers!
I have read several beautiful advent poems
Love yours with the sense of waiting, holding one's breath for the coming of Emmanuel.
thanks for all your support Maureen
hugs from the Moon
Wonderful and modern carol.
Fun play of spirit and flow.
the sun buning the face of the moon...like it. Such well chosen rare words to make me think more. Thanks for stirring the tanks of advent. I sure would like to hear the monks chant.
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