George Tooker, Lunch*, 1964
Egg Tempera on Gesso Panel
Columbus Museum of Art, Ohio
Museum Purchase, Derby Fund
From Philip J. Suzanne Schiller Collection
of American Social Contemporary Art, 1930-1970
This Seat Occupied
Some would give up
their daily bread
for a better cup
of joe, space closer
to the door, where you
can make for the exit
at the tug of the whistle
that sounds as bright
as that shiny steel column
you have to move
around to be able to see
who's eating, who's not.
Be careful about lifting
your head too high,
and never, ever let them
catch you counting
who's using her right hand,
who's just sipping slow,
easy-like. There's no room
here for begging to differ,
nobody's going to let his hair
down or wear a pink shirt
and, hey, lady, get used to it: men
rule! You don't want to
stand out, make noise when
your thirty minutes are up,
and the guy you've always wanted
to meet steps forward
to ask, this seat occupied?
© 2011 Maureen E. Doallas
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This poem is my response to today's photographic prompt (see image above) at Magpie Tales. Join in by writing your own poem or flash fiction, using as inspiration the photo provided, then go here to add your link and read the other participants' contributions.
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* Tooker's Lunch subtly calls to mind the lunch-counter sit-ins and race discrimination protests of the 1960s. Note the body language, who stands out, the social commentary implied by the white bread-eating diners.
13 comments:
You have captured the whole thing pretty much.
Superb, lovely M-- you've done it once more: I love all of it but especially, Be careful about lifting
your head too high,
and never, ever let them
catch you counting
who's using her right hand,
who's just sipping slow,
easy-like.
wonderful take. xj
Thank you for this. I so appreciate the poem, the painting, and knowing it's in Columbus! (Will share with sister in Columbus!)
Excellent.
good one.
i was totally lost in the grey fog of 9-5.
oh that grey 9-5 fog!
Brilliant take on the prompt. You inspired me too! :)
Thank you.
love the power of your words here.
beautiful incentive.
Excellent work!
And yes, YAY for Columbus! I teach at CCAD, the arts university which shares a parking lot with the Columbus Museum of Art :).
Very good take!..
JJrod'z
Very nice ... you brought the image to life.
nice maureen...one of my fav responses to the picture...
You have re-painted this picture with words, Maureen.
Excellent - superb ending!
Anna :o]
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