Homecoming
for Al
Two hundred people
make a place
Where you start out.
When you don't come
from somewhere else
Dirt and rock can be enough.
~
Yesterday, you
went home, you said.
You kicked up clumps
when no one looked, imagining
the lying-in neat-like, cared for
You beside your wife
Your and her remains
together mixed with family gone
there now
and yet to come.
~
A cousin's funeral took you back,
you said. She was 90
And suffered her dementia.
~
A plot of family land
makes place
For peace of mind.
Untidied stones calling out
parents aunts and
uncles cousins husbands
and their loved ones
Count for more than memories
Of who they were
when you stood young.
~
To be buried on the land
is to trace the lines of one
to still another
Relate the sister to the brother,
the 12 on her side
A number on your own indivisible.
~
A century can make or
break a place, build it up or
Level it.
Who's gone can't hold together
what love leaves out brings in lets go.
~
A place can get a hold of you, or not
Mince the sadness refigure grief
weed out goodbyes fill in
the family circle.
I'll take my place, you said I'm thankful.
Copyright © 2010 Maureen E. Doallas. All Rights Reserved.
10 comments:
If you would honor me with the story? Even a little, to fill in the lines?
Blank spaces. This emotes....
So great. I especially love the first lines - absolutely perfect.
i like it.
place can do that.
What a beautiful poem.
What a beautiful gift to your friend, a reflection of your beauty.
Love how you explore the role of place as a kind of go-between, even a mincer of sadness (love that image!) Enigmatic stroll through a highway littered with sidestreets! Beautiful!
Wow, so beautiful. Love these words especially..
...Of who they were
when you stood young.
This is amazing. I'm with Kathleen and would love to hear the story.
That was beautiful and very moving.
Larry
It makes me feel my mortality. I'm thinking of churned up dirt. Of voices silent. Yes, homesick.
Has a spareness that is elegant. Emotional tone for me was somber and reflective.
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