Your Soul Released, Having Risen
for Patrick
March 25, 1950 - May 5, 2009
Those days
you could not fathom,
we counted out
of our range, too,
each becoming another
sworn into our more familiar blues,
the arguments of fictions
mere proofs that love can't move
the way such cells in you
then moved, overworking
thyroid and lung to body entire,
spreading the mischief unexorcised.
You stood
only to fall that night,
your last in your own house.
A call was made,
the first of many known
to seal one mother's hope
to sisters', their waiting somewhere ended.
Two years on, what holds claim
remains not how the priest
made the sign or bathed
us all in incense and light
but how we, with breath inhaled,
made motion to follow you
to your fixed end on earth,
your soul released, having risen.
© 2011 Maureen E. Doallas
Thursday, May 5, 2011
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16 comments:
A really lovely elegy, Maureen.
Beautiful tribute to your brother, Maureen.
Very beautiful!
It is my brother's birthday. I shall call him now and hold our conversation just a little closer. Thanks for putting into words what most cannot Maureen.
Beautifully shared... always such a delicate topic... a sensitive time.
the journey home so beautifully written ...
"Your soul released, having risen." Such holy words, embodying mystery, faith, severing, comfort. Grace to you today as you remember the good-bye.
Love, Jeanne
What a beautiful, formal dignity, Maureen, that last sentence truly an achievement. A testament to your skills and to you love.
So sad, so beautiful, so close Maureen. I know I will read this again and again. Thank you. Gay
Love
May God make your joyful, life-filled memories of your beloved Patrick to loom larger than the painful ones, Maureen.
Dear Maureen
There is certain quality of quietness in this poem. Like as if these are just thoughts emanating out of you as you sit gracefully watching the sea.
Loved the poem. And I am sorry for void you and your family must feel without Patrick's physical presence.
Take care
Padmavani
You captured life and death in this poem, Maureen, and that can be difficult to do, but and you also captured the spiritual journey that isn't greatly impacted by either. Thanks for sharing your tribute to Patrick -- it gives all of us courage to talk about loss in ways that are elegant, yet, profound. With friendship, Daisy
Penny(my wife) died on the beautiful spring morning of May 6th, 2008. Maureen (and Patrick) have given me the gift of a peaceful night.
A moving remembrance, Maureen. Though certainly not planned, but somehow fittingly, I reached the last page of my enriching journey through your book "Neruda's Memoirs" on this anniversary, so sorrowful yet somehow made uplifting by the depth of love and feeling in your words for your brother. Peace and love to you and your family.
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