The roses have been abandoned
in the village of Kuta Rakyat,
the ash from the erupting Mount
Sinabung collected in the spaces
between the slips of the creamy
soft-lipped petals. Two hundred
twenty times a week the volcano
straddling the Pacific Ring of Fire
spews its face powders into air,
the pyroclastic flow on all flanks
racing with hurricane-force speed.
Unpicked coffee beans lie in paths
of too-hot lava runs, a dog goes down
in a plumed dome of smoke, and rice
already harvested is emptied again
from wooden bowls. There are rocks
being thrown from heaven. The chili
trees wither and once-bright skins
of oranges bear crusty coats forbidden
to the masked children still showing
up for school lessons. Among gnarled
grey-black stalks, a single hibiscus
flower rises like a cup of red wine.
When lightning strikes, the ringing
of cell phones ends in dead silence.
© 2014 Maureen E. Doallas
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Indonesia's Mount Sinabung has been erupting for weeks now, displacing tens of thousands, destroying crops, and threatening native flora and fauna. The stunning photographs of the eruption are the inspiration for this poem.
11 comments:
I saw the news report. This is another ways of telling the news - and I think a better one. Good poem.
Whew! I don't need to see the photos, since your vivid images paint the horrid picture devastatingly. Thank you.
Wow. Devastating.
ugh. imagine the destruction it leaves in its wake...you def capture the vivid images in your words maureen...
I love the concrete imagery in this piece. You keep it paced and spaced nicely. But it is that last stich, about the ringing phone that blew me away and made this poem a treasure to have read. Strong, strong, composition. I love reading this kind of talented poetry.
Vivid writing. Thank you for sharing.
A lot of very telling details, very concrete, well observed. And, above all, you've selected the most touching ones.
I missed the news item. The poem is vivid, dark, well written.
Seeing the photos, and reading your poem bring it to a new place for me. Well done, this is finely crafted.
"and rice
already harvested is emptied again
from wooden bowls"
something so strong here...
can't put a finger on it yet
You bring this devastation to life with your vivid images. Such a sad thing to see so much loss and destruction.
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